Reviews for His Mechanic, Her Alchemist
Guest chapter 1 . 4/1/2015
Though I absoulutley LOVED the first chapter I think it would have been funny if Al and mustang walked in on them while winry was asking Wjat was wrong and offered to kiss his head or when win was in between his legs and al started singing sitting in a tree and mustang started making his smart remarks that would have been amazing but other than that WONDERFUL!
SonicxAmyFan4Life chapter 13 . 5/14/2009
Haha it's SO hard to find a good, long FMA EdWin-based fanfic that the characters actually stay in freakin' character! XD Great job on keeping the characters in character and I absolutely loved the story! Great job! Hope to see greater works from you in the future! God bless!

romanceaddict3320 chapter 13 . 6/7/2008
u hav no idea how angry i was when u said that u weren't going 2 finish the story because i didn't see the epilouge at first and i was furious! :) anyway it was a super amazing story. Ed is so stupid sometimes (all the time) it was great! keep writing!
Took-Baggins chapter 13 . 1/9/2008
aw, that was so cute! very nice for an ending, i'm glad you included it! on the whole, i liked this story very much, thank you so much for writing it!
Took-Baggins chapter 12 . 1/9/2008
i'm sorry to hear that, but i understand. sometimes a story just leaves you (i've got a few like that too). well, at least you were nice enough to let us know what else was going to happen!
Took-Baggins chapter 11 . 1/9/2008
well it's about time he got around to it!


i love Ed and Winry, they're just so awesome together!
Took-Baggins chapter 10 . 1/9/2008
i love Al's random memory up there, it was pretty funny _
Took-Baggins chapter 9 . 1/9/2008
Sloth was never my favorite homunculus, but she was pretty cool i guess. pity she's dead. well, it is in some way...i just haven't thought of it yet...
Took-Baggins chapter 8 . 1/9/2008
what the heck! didn't see that coming at all! it was nice, though, after such a depressing chapter, to have something a bit happy at the end!
Took-Baggins chapter 7 . 1/9/2008
whoa! intense chapter, there! plenty of action, it was really exciting.

FINALLY Ed's admitted to it! YES!
Took-Baggins chapter 6 . 1/9/2008
i love these guys, it so easy to make them funny _
Took-Baggins chapter 5 . 1/9/2008
well, he's certainly trying, isn't he? that wasn't lame, i thought it was pretty cute (the whole dizzy thing). you're right, though, they are aggrivating!
Took-Baggins chapter 4 . 1/9/2008
wow, Al's getting a bit angry, isn't he? guess he's tired of watching those two go back and forth all the time...

i'm really enjoying this fic. it's great!
Took-Baggins chapter 3 . 1/9/2008
poor Ed! that didn't go well at all, did it?
Took-Baggins chapter 2 . 1/9/2008
i love the way Hawkeye intimidates him into making it a date, she's awesome _ and Al too, of course!
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