| Reviews for Shadow and the Soul |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 4/6/2019 Pirate. Pirate. Pirate. After a year of searching this story it is still as haunting as I remember. |
 StarlingChild4 chapter 1 . 2/19/2019 Beautiful. I'm personally a Willabeth shipper myself, but I cannot deny the electrifying chemistry that Elizabeth shares with Jack. One of the few "love triangles" out there where either party is perfectly believable and ship-worthy. You did a fantastic job showing the thrilling, deeply sexual attraction Elizabeth has towards Jack. Gorgeous use of prose and emotions. Well done! |
| sharpestsatire chapter 1 . 9/5/2015 I love the "At the beginning, he saved you" line. And the "pirate pirate pirate" thing at the end. This is great. :) |
| We'reAllMad chapter 1 . 9/8/2013 I like this! This sums up their relationship perfectly; I especially love the last one, and how it showcases how unpredictable Jack is. |
| KraZiiePyrozHavemoreFun chapter 1 . 8/20/2013 Delightful |
| TwistingKaleidoscope chapter 1 . 8/1/2013 I've been going through some of the older fanfics, my favorite, of PotC because I recently watched the entire series, and I stumbled upon your fic. I love it! I love the way, the perfect way, you've written Elizabeth and the way that she sees Jack. This is a wonderful piece, and your writing is very amazing here! Thanks for sharing! |
| cypris88 chapter 1 . 5/6/2013 Lovely writing. Elizabeth's inner thoughts are so strong and interesting. It looks like some of your formatting lines were stripped out so it's a bit hard to follow at times, but not impossible. |
| Sassytore chapter 1 . 4/17/2013 I like how Elizabeth is worried about dying an old cat woman. And I like the repetition of pirate, pirate, pirate...really brought back some feels. I also liked how you picked scenes and analysed them, while creating your own. It was also really organized. I enjoyed it, all though, when jack corrects her and says, "swaggered" seems a little odd. I honestly doubt they would say this word in the 1700s. Consider rewording that. It's a great word to use to describe Jack's walking outside of dialogue. |
| Anon chapter 1 . 10/17/2012 Very nice! Really captures "Lizzies" essence :) |
| Miss BlueBird chapter 1 . 10/8/2012 Hello! I really liked your fic. It is simply one of the best J/E I've ever read. I'd like to translate it to Portuguese, if that's okay with you. Thanks! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/15/2012 No words for this. The portraying of both characters is perfect. Absolutely brilliant! Let's just forget about the fourth movie. :) |
| CutieSOS chapter 1 . 2/27/2012 this was really good. |
| jack chapter 1 . 2/27/2012 The old ones are thee best 3 |
| saudade do coracao chapter 1 . 2/14/2012 This was excellent. I enjoyed it! |
| Yorik chapter 1 . 11/10/2009 I diggit. |