|Reviews for The Saviour|
| falafel-fiction chapter 1 . 12/16/2006
This is a lovely little moment you've captured. I hope that the 'Chesmond' relationship ends up like this one day. I also hope you're right that Desmond will be respectful of Charlie's feelings for Claire as they will remind him of his feelings for Penny. I don't want to see any of this Daire bussiness!
| Cupcake Mojo chapter 1 . 10/8/2006
Desmond and Charlie are my two favorite characters. I think you portrayed them both very nicely. Good job, dearie!
| Got Scots chapter 1 . 7/24/2006
Aw, you should go off and continue this. Have some Charlie and Claire stuff after words. But I really like this story. Des is my favourite character and so naturally I like to read ANYTHING about him. But this story was really cute. I like the beginning-comparing wine to waves. Very good, brotha.
| Victoria to Worthing chapter 1 . 7/15/2006
I love your description of Charlie! Your depiction of Desmond's hopelessness makes me so sad. :( I liked how you said he hoped to wash his weakness away. I love Des... and Charlie of course. A good ending, too. :)
| Miss Becky chapter 1 . 7/15/2006
These are two characters I never thought about putting together in a situation. I'm glad you did! They are both completely in character, and of all people, Desmond is the one who truly could give Charlie some useful advice about Claire. Well done!
| BlueSunflower chapter 1 . 7/14/2006
I missed this. You have Desmond's voice and pessimism, and Charlie's quiet desolation down pat.
| CharliesHoodie chapter 1 . 7/12/2006
Aw...yay Charlie and Des. I love them both. They could have an interesting relationship.
| Spice of Life chapter 1 . 7/12/2006
That was excellent, I really enjoyed that. Nice job!
| TheEvilTrafficCone chapter 1 . 7/12/2006
Yo these are my two favorite characters! I like the dialogue between them, very interesting!
| Eater chapter 1 . 7/12/2006
That was good, although not the best. Desmond is one of my favorite characters, though.