Reviews for Naruto's Secret
Sarsaparilla chapter 1 . 7/14/2006
So good! Very entertaing! I'm glad I read it! I want more. Are you considering a sequel? Gotta love Naruto and his naivety! For being set in an alternate universe, your oneshot kept the characters very IN character. Sasuke was portrayed very well.

All in all, I was made very happy. I'm glad I read it.
CircadianDance chapter 1 . 7/14/2006
That's right, rid of the socks! xD

I hate it when people actually turn Sasuke or Naruto into a girl -.- it's much better when they're cross-dressing and gay x3

loved this. Adding it to my C2, the Best NarutoxSasuke AU Fics

BFDreaming chapter 1 . 7/13/2006
Haha, Naruto's stupid.

Socks. That's great. He knew they were socks! (laughs maniacally)
Kitty Otaku chapter 1 . 7/13/2006
That was totally awesome
koolmint26 chapter 1 . 7/13/2006
they did it in a bar that is fun? not really but who's keeping track?
Darkest Moon chapter 1 . 7/13/2006
I love it! Excellent story! It's an instant fav in my favorite story list.
Jack of Chocolate chapter 1 . 7/13/2006
I loved this fanfic! Very funny... I thought I was going to burst with laughter. Naruto's part was hilarious, and I love this pairing. I'm looking forward to more of your work!
ameo66 chapter 1 . 7/13/2006
OMG THAT WAS AWESOME! I hate being a stupid fangirl, but I really wish you would write another chapter.
Smurfy20 chapter 1 . 7/13/2006
that was brilliant! -happy dance- amazing! loved it! WRITE MORE! please? -chibi eyes- -favs story and author-
Imari-chan chapter 1 . 7/13/2006

wow, that was cute! The way you make everything fall together is really great, and it was funny also...I found myself laughing a lot of the times! Great story!

Fields of View chapter 1 . 7/13/2006
That. Was. CUTE! *squeals*

there are just so many little things in there that makes me laugh.. Naruto's train of thought is just _so_ amusing.. the language is wonderful, this is just cute, cute cute! love it!
KC Evans chapter 1 . 7/12/2006
Overall, a wonderful, amusing story. I really liked the interaction between the characters and reading about things from Naruto's point of view. He has such a humorous outtake on life and I love that kind of sardonic and wry humor. The conversations between Naruto and Sasuke were well done, revealing their relationship differently than what it is at school.

There were several grammatically errors and I wouldn't recommend putting in an AN in the middle of the story as it disrupts the flow, even if it's informational to the reader. However, it's definitely easy to read and be absorbed in and I really enjoyed reading it.

Looking forward to more stories from you!
Libelula202 chapter 1 . 7/12/2006
Squee! XD Great story! It made me laugh, a LOT!

Gonna fav it!

Rice-Ball247 chapter 1 . 7/12/2006
XD that fic does strike my fancy! really satisfying, i love it! great idea lol and the ending was perfect :P well nothing much I can say except that it's a terrific job! keep up the great writing!
Shaay chapter 1 . 7/12/2006
I love this. I could imagine Naruto in his costume, dressed as a girl. The whole story was just too cute. Great job with this.
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