Reviews for A Scent Forever Ruined
Hinatafangirl123 chapter 1 . 4/7
it was cute! Great story and your an amzing writer!
GalaxyKitty chapter 1 . 7/20/2014
I love it! :D poor Kiba :,( does Naruto really smell that bad? I guess it's just that Kiba really hates him now:( as i already said, pooorr Kiibaaaa :,'(
Clairhys chapter 1 . 10/6/2013
I'm- only going to say the good points! :9
- Awesome introduction
- Lovely canon Vharacters!
- and...
uhh, now I'm gonna start the bad points (Oh no!) Sorry I lied. ;D
- There's a few cram up sentences which doesn't go with duh flow Which lead readers on to dismal. Or simply put, the next sentence didn't go with the previous sentence. Some. (It's a tragic thing I face too sadly.)
- hmm, nothing more... Except I expected 'angsty' classified and I find it humourous... :D
P.S. No flaming intended, because you won me over with humour. I was REALLY reviewing!
MlleShadow chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
Nooo, Hinata, why did you do with Narutooo! Poor Kiba! xD Nice oneshot, i really liked it! :D There's not always a happy ending, unfortunately!
nothingavailablenow chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
whoa. It was really amazing. The best KibaHina story I've ever read.
Annasuki chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
super cute one shot loved it
Agnes Green chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
really cute, and slightly sad. i like the fact that you didnt make it too dramatic.
whateverbro chapter 1 . 3/14/2010
Damn. Onesided KibaHina.

Lol. I'm sorry. Just a bit obsessive. Good job though. :)
TheSecretNotebook chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
aw... Dx no!

nonono );
Whats Mine Is Yours chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
aww! that was sad!

the intro was cute, but then it got all sad...
Writer of Random chapter 1 . 12/2/2008
That was funny! At first I was skeptical of how good it would be because of the title, but I loved it!
OSYH chapter 1 . 9/9/2008
Aw, poor Kiba! His relationship with Hinata was so sweet at th beginning...and I feel so bad for him at the end! Too bad he didn't talk it over with Hinata...
itstehchibiness chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
Aw you should continue this! D:! make it a two shot! XDD! anyway nice story :)
CuriousBabyVamp chapter 1 . 2/24/2008
aw i feel so bad for kiba. i wonder how he'll act around naruto now (hint hint nudge nudge idea for a second chappie) it must suck that super sense of smell. you really kept kiba and the others in character which is hard to find. great work.
justastranger chapter 1 . 2/6/2008
Wow... that was amazing.
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