Reviews for Ognora Amore
IronBat99 chapter 1 . 7/26/2015
That was also entirely adorable! -
She-Elf4 chapter 1 . 4/17/2007
It's a cute story. It took me a while to piece together the italian from the words at the bottom of the page. But the italian was a nice touch, even if it isn't quite right (not that I would really know!)
TiburonChick chapter 1 . 9/26/2006
Aw, that's so cute! Great! I love Guido he's sweet.
FlowerofAdversity chapter 1 . 8/17/2006
I'm not a big fan of slash but I must say I found this rather well done. I love Italians, the Italian language, Italian food...Heck, almost anything Italian. :} Tremendous job, I almost felt a little choked up.
Phantom chapter 1 . 8/2/2006
I'm sorry to bored you, is a great story, but I'm Italian and some terms that you did used are incorret for the contest:

Forever persempre

God dio

Boy ragazzo (never my grandma' use giovinetto for call the Boy)

I io (a me to me)

you tu (a te to you)

not no

To ... I think is not translated alone

so così... ex you are so beaut... tu sei così bello/a

(what is orbene?)

Sweet dolce, amabile

Me me, io, (me stesso myself)

never mai (nobody use giammai)

him lui

He lui (egli)

excuse me for my correction but I think Is a costructive criticism _
Amphitrite II chapter 1 . 7/14/2006
This was ultra-cute! The Italian was a nice touch. The third paragraph is the sweetest! Keep up the great work. :)
illiana chapter 1 . 7/14/2006
tu sei italiana?
Ham-Kelly chapter 1 . 7/13/2006
That was... beautiful. I loved the little Italian bits. D
taishige chapter 1 . 7/13/2006
Cute cute cute CUTE! 3 I love those two! Great little fic!