|Reviews for The Return|
| Hhr shipper chapter 10 . 1/3
Please continue this is an amazing fanfic ️️️ Plz plz
| Samuel Davidson chapter 10 . 3/2/2017
A lot of things happen in America as in The mew President Donald Trump, and the collage hockey team of the U.S.A won first place out of all the countries.
| Harley G. Potter chapter 10 . 12/8/2016
My mistake your a girl sooooooo sorry but plz pretty plz make them 'do it' plz (with detail) plz plz plz plz i beg you
| Sexyness in here chapter 10 . 12/8/2016
Plz plz plz make more let the scene be continued plz plz
| Harley G. Potter chapter 10 . 11/21/2016
Make more plz and make them shag/have sex/hook up each other plz this is good i mean great and awesome! And you are a BOY i thought you were a girl ether way make more plz!:)
| Lord Peverell-Potter-Black chapter 10 . 9/27/2016
Please update this is Fucking awesome I like how you planned the plot it was awesome I hope you make a update soon regards Greekfreek1
| Henry Starmer chapter 10 . 9/18/2016
Pls write the next chapter, I love this fic and yes, carry this scene on!
| Bob chapter 10 . 8/13/2016
Awesome. This might seem a little awkward but maybe they should "do it"
| great.nabiha chapter 10 . 5/17/2016
Complete this story plzzzzz.
This is the best mystery& romance fic i have read so far.
Hope u'll right again soon
| Princess-of-the-Pen chapter 10 . 2/21/2016
This is what I get for starting a good story without looking at when it was last updated... or starting a story that wasn't completed in the first place. 2007... hasn't been updated in about 9 years... PLEASE UPDATE!
| Guest chapter 10 . 7/7/2015
yes please continue i love this fanfuction please i beg you
| mindtrick1986 chapter 10 . 7/19/2014
I really enjoyed the entire story and am looking forward to future chapters.
| PixieH chapter 10 . 3/23/2013
More please x
| eric.daly.127 chapter 10 . 2/24/2013
can u update plz
| Guest chapter 10 . 7/11/2012
Has been some time but a very good story.
An amazing start point, quite out of the ordinary, what makes it special.
I like it very much.
Unfortunately it seems that you have abandoned it.
There is room for several more interesting chapters.
Cant you convince your muse to have a go?
Would be soo good.
This great story deserves to go on.
I know it has been several years but sometimes very good things need some time to breed?