Reviews for The Return
Samuel Davidson chapter 10 . 3/2
Dear writer,
A lot of things happen in America as in The mew President Donald Trump, and the collage hockey team of the U.S.A won first place out of all the countries.
Harley G. Potter chapter 10 . 12/8/2016
My mistake your a girl sooooooo sorry but plz pretty plz make them 'do it' plz (with detail) plz plz plz plz i beg you
Sexyness in here chapter 10 . 12/8/2016
Plz plz plz make more let the scene be continued plz plz
Harley G. Potter chapter 10 . 11/21/2016
Make more plz and make them shag/have sex/hook up each other plz this is good i mean great and awesome! And you are a BOY i thought you were a girl ether way make more plz!:)
Greekfreek1 chapter 10 . 9/27/2016
Please update this is Fucking awesome I like how you planned the plot it was awesome I hope you make a update soon regards Greekfreek1
Henry Starmer chapter 10 . 9/18/2016
Pls write the next chapter, I love this fic and yes, carry this scene on!
Bob chapter 10 . 8/13/2016
Awesome. This might seem a little awkward but maybe they should "do it"
great.nabiha chapter 10 . 5/17/2016
Complete this story plzzzzz.
This is the best mystery& romance fic i have read so far.
Hope u'll right again soon
Princess-of-the-Pen chapter 10 . 2/21/2016
This is what I get for starting a good story without looking at when it was last updated... or starting a story that wasn't completed in the first place. 2007... hasn't been updated in about 9 years... PLEASE UPDATE!
Guest chapter 10 . 7/7/2015
yes please continue i love this fanfuction please i beg you
mindtrick1986 chapter 10 . 7/19/2014
I really enjoyed the entire story and am looking forward to future chapters.
PixieH chapter 10 . 3/23/2013
More please x
eric.daly.127 chapter 10 . 2/24/2013
can u update plz
Guest chapter 10 . 7/11/2012
Has been some time but a very good story.
An amazing start point, quite out of the ordinary, what makes it special.
I like it very much.
Unfortunately it seems that you have abandoned it.
There is room for several more interesting chapters.
Cant you convince your muse to have a go?
Would be soo good.
This great story deserves to go on.

Please!

I know it has been several years but sometimes very good things need some time to breed?
Please!
katy7089 chapter 10 . 11/22/2011
I love this chapter! It just shows how everyone is beginning to realize that he's finally home and how they're overcoming Mark's wrongdoings. I'm really excited to see what you have next! Please continue to write! xoxox Katy
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