Reviews for The Return
mindtrick1986 chapter 10 . 7/19/2014
I really enjoyed the entire story and am looking forward to future chapters.
PixieH chapter 10 . 3/23/2013
More please x
eric.daly.127 chapter 10 . 2/24/2013
can u update plz
Guest chapter 10 . 7/11/2012
Has been some time but a very good story.
An amazing start point, quite out of the ordinary, what makes it special.
I like it very much.
Unfortunately it seems that you have abandoned it.
There is room for several more interesting chapters.
Cant you convince your muse to have a go?
Would be soo good.
This great story deserves to go on.

Please!

I know it has been several years but sometimes very good things need some time to breed?
Please!
katy7089 chapter 10 . 11/22/2011
I love this chapter! It just shows how everyone is beginning to realize that he's finally home and how they're overcoming Mark's wrongdoings. I'm really excited to see what you have next! Please continue to write! xoxox Katy
ms.lostkidd chapter 10 . 8/30/2011
Brilliant story, I think it would be great if you continued on with it.
folwer chapter 10 . 7/28/2011
I've been going through all your stories, and I'm kind of sad that you never finished this one. Any chance you'll pick up where you left off... way back when? lol
FanFicFreek chapter 10 . 7/2/2011
Arrgh evil cliffhanger! Excellent story so far can't wait for the rest!
kulover13 chapter 10 . 3/10/2011
can you pretty please finish this story! I see that it's been almost four years since you have updated, but please!
RonRR chapter 10 . 11/2/2010
Hopefully you will continue this story at some point in time.

I've enjoyed what you have written so far and I am interested in seeing where you take things.

You haven't updated in 3 years and your more recent stories are Hr-G so I'm not sure you are still interested in continuing this one, hopefully you will.

Ron Roberts
overlord of hell 2012 chapter 1 . 10/22/2010
enjoyed what ive read so far and hope you update soon
mjac1017 chapter 10 . 8/15/2010
good story! i think you should finish it though
Scabbers1957 chapter 10 . 1/9/2010
This is an original story & I will add it to my story favs & alerts.

I hope there will be future chapters.

:)
bernadette aquino chapter 10 . 12/23/2009
please continue this chapter! please...
unknown chapter 10 . 7/8/2009
please update again it has been quite a while since you've added another segment to this fine fic. I'll be waiting. Till then
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