Reviews for Love Slave In A Bottle
odalys-ortiz chapter 13 . 5/29/2009
I'm so happy that it ended well for the both of them. Having Maria be pregnant was a bit of a surprise for me but I don't mind. I loved the story and I credit you for doing a great job
odalys-ortiz chapter 12 . 5/29/2009
Oh man, this is their only chance. That's scary thought. I have no doubt though that it will work and Dave will be released
odalys-ortiz chapter 11 . 5/29/2009
Donald is just a bitch, plain and simple. I hope that Dave gets his hands on him and get him out of Maria's life forever. Then they can get together
odalys-ortiz chapter 10 . 5/29/2009
What a dirty trick. I don't think it will work in the least though, especially with Dave willing to hear her story. I hope that what they have is love and that the lamp will be in the back of their minds
odalys-ortiz chapter 9 . 5/29/2009
God, the plan is starting to ruin my mood. Hopefully it won't work. Man Maria's parents are just idiots. Great chapter though
odalys-ortiz chapter 8 . 5/29/2009
I would assume it's the best friend since that's the only other person who would want the best for Dave and Maria. Hopefully the plan doesn't work because I want to see them together.
odalys-ortiz chapter 7 . 5/29/2009
At least her father finally came out of the darn lamp. Now there are some questions that need to get answered. Hopefully that will be in the next chapter. Great job
odalys-ortiz chapter 6 . 5/29/2009
Why do I get the feeling things aren't going to be good for long? I hope that Dave and Maria can truly be together soon
odalys-ortiz chapter 5 . 5/29/2009
That is a twist that I didn't see coming at all. Her father was a love slave? Damn, now I definitely got to read more, not like I wasn't going to do that anyway.
odalys-ortiz chapter 4 . 5/29/2009
Lol, that's an obvious reaction when someone is standing NAKED in your house. Man, I would have had a bit of fun before calling my friend. Loved the chapter
odalys-ortiz chapter 3 . 5/29/2009
How romantic that the love slave has eyes for Maria. I can't wait to see when he gets summoned
odalys-ortiz chapter 2 . 5/29/2009
That must have been a really good drink to make her do something stupid like that. Hopefully something will happen with the lamp soon
odalys-ortiz chapter 1 . 5/29/2009
Damn that is a harsh punishment from Athena. Hopefully he will find love and get his butt out of the bottle. Love this first chapter. Pretty unique
nomoreofthisimtired chapter 13 . 4/11/2009
aw that was so sweet. i wish it could have continued
Lizzy chapter 13 . 11/17/2008
I loved this story it is the best one I have ever read!
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