Reviews for Tima's Season 3
Guest chapter 9 . 1/4
Just a silly thing, but you forgot the 2 in your I-M-M-O-R-T-A-L-I-T-Y numerical code.
DeathDagger chapter 1 . 1/12/2015
I cried this entire chapter :-(
XxPhoenixRisingxX chapter 10 . 2/18/2010
I read a lot of fan fiction on this site. I review probably 60 stories a day, and I currently beta write (in an unofficial capacity) for 13 writers. I have personally published 16 books, here in the real world.

I tell you all of this, so that you are aware that I know what the hell I'm talking about!

I find a lot of decent writers here. Some write good action, others good sex.

You write good, period. The emotion you are able to convey is astounding.

Not one other story I have read on this site has been able to bring tears to my eyes - like yours did when Goliath 'died'.

I can hardly wait to read the next one. That will, unfortunately, have to wait. It is already midnight, and I can't take my desktop to bed with me!

Keep writing!
dispatcher652 chapter 10 . 3/25/2009
I just finished this season and I thought that it was a great read.
Wispr chapter 10 . 1/5/2009
Wonderful honeymoon you did there.

Wispr chapter 9 . 1/5/2009
Lovely wedding and look forward to see what you come up with next.

Wispr chapter 8 . 1/5/2009
You did a great job with how the spell effected everyone, came across as very believable.

Wispr chapter 7 . 1/5/2009
Wont Demona ever learn.

Wispr chapter 6 . 1/5/2009
If Elisa was smart she would've made the age to get the money 100 yrs... ;)

Wispr chapter 5 . 1/5/2009
Your story line sure has took an interesting twist.

Wispr chapter 4 . 1/5/2009
I bet old man Dracon is spinning in his grave... really enjoying reading your stories.

Wispr chapter 3 . 1/5/2009
Nice way to resolve his death, wondering if Elisa will say yes or no.

Wispr chapter 2 . 1/5/2009
Heart wrenching chapter!

Wispr chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
Awesome job in writing the angst everyone was feeling.

Daisydill chapter 10 . 11/1/2007
I love it! So glad to see Elisa and Goliath together at last!
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