Reviews for Shrouded Heart
VeroniqueClaire chapter 1 . 12/27/2015
Beautifully written; your sense of pace and the flow of the piece is just lovely.
We'reAllMad chapter 1 . 9/8/2013
You have really powerful writing, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading this.
owl-eyes and wolfsheim inc chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
That was some freaking EPIC SAUCE there. I normally don't read POTC fanfiction, even though I absolutely worship the movies, but this was freaking awesome. I am so glad that I clicked on it.

All three of them were portrayed wonderfully; you did such an amazing job with Lizzie and Will's interactions. I loved her little dream with Jack, and before I forget! You added the scars (!); I watched the extra scenes one time, and that scene blew me away. I am so so so glad that you added them into the story!


Definitely going into my faves!
Yorik chapter 1 . 11/9/2009
Argh, amazing! :)
Madame Band Geek chapter 1 . 6/18/2008


I've loved J/L ever since DMC and I was pretty disappointed in AWE.

But this is so completely awesome- you've captured Elizabeth, plain and simple. I can literally SEE her walking about saying these things, and Will being all stubborn and not-Jack like.

And on that note, I totally loved that dream. XD

Awesome job. You're fantastic!
waterlilies52 chapter 1 . 3/19/2008
Aww I've always supported Elizabeth and Jack. Will's just too dull :) LOL and I can totally imagine him saying the "peas in a pod" line and tacking a "darling" at the end. It's just so delightfully Jack-ish :D
Turning Pirate chapter 1 . 7/21/2007
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viennacantabile chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
so, just curious, but i wonder if your perspective on this has changed at all since AWE came out. since, you know, will's totally a dashing pirate and everything now. i thought AWE did wonders for his character, actually. he's way better (and hotter) as his de-heartified self. :D
MuslimBarbie chapter 1 . 6/20/2007
Wow. Probably one of the best Pirates fics I've read yet.
primadonna001 chapter 1 . 6/7/2007
and still her gaze drifts out to see - achingly scanning beyond the confines of her gilded coffin

hehe, very nice
ZekksGoddess chapter 1 . 6/4/2007
Beautifully tragic.

You gave Elizabeth such depth, and such was fantastic. And the symbolism with the corset was genius.

I loved of the best things I've read in a while. :)
Spellman chapter 1 . 4/22/2007
Aw, that was really good! It's a nice filler for between the two movies. D I liked it a lot, great job!
Finding Beauty chapter 1 . 3/18/2007
Oh, wow.

Hmm. I rarely read anything anymore, much less leave reviews, but I got curious after reading your meme in LiveJournal and decided to check it out.

I loved this. I was feeling pretty apathetic toward the PotC fandom, but after reading this ... you just single-handedly reminded me of everything that I had ever felt for the story.

My favorite: 'She closes the book, which suddenly seems a disappointment. It knows everything about the pirate and nothing of the man.'
Sir Drake's Heir chapter 1 . 3/18/2007
Oh! Amazing little interlude for the in-between part of the trilogy. And Sparrabeth to boot. I liked her dream, and the last paragraph, and the part where she told her maid to get rid of the book.

In that part especially, the simplicity in the way you executed it made it so much more powerful. Kudos. :)
Ditte3 chapter 1 . 12/21/2006
It1s excellent and beautiful.
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