|Reviews for What If|
| dead feather chapter 2 . 12/9/2013
Draco's characterisation is a bit jumpy. Weird at times. Im eager to see if he gains some depth
| BaraKiryuHuntress chapter 19 . 7/13/2013
I loved this sooo much! I'm going to go read the sequal now! :)
| kingmassey chapter 19 . 7/5/2013
This was all sorts of confusing, but I understood and figured it out. I am confused how Harry fell deeply in love that fast when he admitted all he had was a little crush, but I do love the story and plot. It was amazing. Nice job!
| kingmassey chapter 18 . 7/5/2013
AHHHHH! What was this? Oh my gosh, I thought Draco was dead. He jumped in front of Harry! Eeeee. Harry remembers...sort of, kind of. Eeeeep. This was so good. :D I am glad Draco when back and though I love voldie, for this particular story i am glad he is gone!
| kingmassey chapter 17 . 7/5/2013
Whoa! Things are just getting really intense now. Oh man.
Draco really needs to go back, quickly now.
| kingmassey chapter 16 . 7/5/2013
What the...? 0.o Hermione showing up, but...older maybe?
I am so confused at this point. Hopefully it will make more sense later. xD
All I can imagine is 2nd draco disappearing to 1st dracos time to telling hermione what is going on. That is my guess...but not, since she is different now?
No idea ,but I am very interested to read more. :D
| kingmassey chapter 15 . 7/5/2013
Eeeeee! This is so crazy. This Harry is not the same. He might not be able to pull it off, even with dracos help.
| kingmassey chapter 14 . 7/5/2013
I tried looking for the forum link, but I cannot seem to find it. I probably skimmed over it by accident.
Also, very nice chapter. I feel sorry for Draco, about his mother in his real time. He needs his parents love.
| kingmassey chapter 13 . 7/5/2013
I am still surprised to see the fatherly affection. I think that shocks me the most out of everything so far. xD
Very well written, though. (:
| kingmassey chapter 12 . 7/5/2013
GO DRACO! Gah, Harry was getting so annoying. I am glad he was kicked out for the night. He needs to think things over. Actually, Draco should just go back to his own time, voldie or not. Get that Harry. When I read fanfic, I usually don't read ones with Harry as a main character. Now that I have, I want real Harry back.
| kingmassey chapter 11 . 7/5/2013
Oh boy, I do not see this ending well. So much has changed. Maybe it will end well, but not the way it was supposed to in Draco's actual time. If he trains as a deatheater, they will all know his moves.
| kingmassey chapter 10 . 7/5/2013
Whoa. 0.o That went rather quickly, I think. I was expecting it to wait a few more chapters. At least it happened, I guess.
Harry's relationship with Dumbledore is so different. I understand why, but wow. At least Dumbledore was able to catch on that Draco wasn't Draco and was able to help a little. Well, not really but kind of.
| kingmassey chapter 9 . 7/5/2013
Oh wow, that was a crazy turn of events. I can get used to Draco helping Harry with everything, just need time to process it all. Very nice job! :D
| kingmassey chapter 8 . 7/5/2013
Whoops, my bad. I went ahead to the next chapter before I reviewed. I had to come back!
I am not a fan of clingy Harry, but this was a cute chapter. He seems so happy at the end of it.
At least Draco has Blaise and other Draco to help him!
| kingmassey chapter 7 . 7/5/2013
Haha, that is hilarious. xD I love this chapter. very nice job!
Poor Harry, but he is reallllly clingy. Reminds me of Pansy now.