Reviews for One mistake
Robynx Naida chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
mushroomcloudslooklikebroccoli chapter 1 . 3/13/2007
THat really scared me at the end...good clockwork! I found this a perfectly believable AU story...(shivers) creepy...suicidal Danneh...(gulp)
HushedFury chapter 1 . 9/16/2006
omg! that wuz so kul! woah, you've got skills lyndz!
Avalon's mists chapter 1 . 9/11/2006
I liked this even though it was dark. You should do another one
SquirrelGirl13 chapter 1 . 8/17/2006
O_o Dark... I like it actualy!

It's cool in a dark, twisted sort of way... :D

I think I'm gunna fave this... yes I will!

Nice job!

Xela Tokrub chapter 1 . 7/15/2006
ooh... very nice... are ya gonna do a oneshot sequel?... cuz ya realy should... this story is soo good...
Loony Dagda chapter 1 . 7/14/2006
O.O I LOVE THIS STORY! This is an amazing idea. I can't believe that noone thought of this before! Congratz. I have one problem. How can you say this is complete! Wit an ending like that! TIME OUT! Does that mean that Clockwork stopped Danny from killing himself? I need to know what happened.I definetly hope there's more!

Ciao XP

Nobody Famous chapter 1 . 7/14/2006
Wow...that is dark. Poor least Clockwork's there to help.

That was a really good start. This is definitely a fic I want to see continued.
HornedHalo chapter 1 . 7/14/2006
o this is good! Poor Danny.. dont worry i love him! I know how he feels... poor baby! aww this is good in a sad way i guess! but i like it alot!
GoddesoftheMoon chapter 1 . 7/14/2006
woah, it was very dark, and sad. i loved it. is there gonna be another chapter? even if there isnt i loved it so much!