|Reviews for Training Exercise|
| Taipan Kiryu chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
Your portrait of the Combaticons is impeccable. Fanfiction is a matter of read, about creating images in the mind that can be very vivid indeed, but really few stories manage to actually create an actual episode in the reader’s head.
Yours do, by all means.
“No offense. Now, if you’ll excuse us, we feel it’s extremely necessary to our escape that we grab Skywarp by the wings and, as the humans would say, make a wish.”
This is one of the best endings I have ever read. I feel sorry for Skywarp but he asked for it. I liked that the Combaticons were fair with Thundercracker, though.
| UC chapter 1 . 9/25/2007
A good story!
| Lady Starscream chapter 1 . 7/14/2006
(grins) I figured they were going to get loose eventually. And that wisecrack about "in space you can hear starscream" was cute! good job and keep 'em coming!