Reviews for Revealing
sundes2013 chapter 1 . 3/28
Awwwww hinata and shino are too cute and i could see shino listening hinata's requests than kiba. I really like the bickering between kiba and shino in the flashback as well.
Fanwoman chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
I prefer cookies, thank you. :D

I love the comparison to telling a toddler "no."

"Dog ears." LOL

As far as I know, neither Shino or Kiba use "chan."

Pfft! Ah, the ways you could misconstrue the "You're hot" conversation.

Ooo! Good idea, Hinata!

Kiba's theories are funny.

Interesting backstory for Shino!

And such a warm and fuzzy yet angsty ending!

Yum yum!
XXCaptainUsoppXX chapter 1 . 6/10/2011
I really enjoyed this. An interesing idea. I've often wondered about what's beneath Shino's glasses, but not what's beneath his coat.

HinataMorningstar chapter 1 . 8/9/2008
this is cute.
iIzzJiao chapter 1 . 9/8/2007
Haha! I LOVED Kiba rambling on about dog food and crack and piercings. It totally made me laugh out loud.

This story was really cute too, at the end.

Humor sweetness perfection.

Great job!
Yumi chapter 1 . 3/10/2007
I would LOVE to see a sequal to this... or, have I said that already? At any rate, I adore this story!
Dylan chapter 1 . 12/16/2006
Are you gonna make another chapter or a sequal?
Shineko-chan chapter 1 . 12/14/2006
fuck I wouldn't mind shino with a whole bunch of scars just makes him sound cooler
Arashi-chan23 chapter 1 . 11/7/2006
VERY nively done. You kept everyone in character-not easy, especially with Shino. I'm actually kind of sad about your one-year or so sabbatical.
badgermomma chapter 1 . 9/23/2006
that was really intelligent, the whle 2 females and 1 male thing. i liked it, very pretty. very deep. i like shino because i c myself in him. hinata is so sweet and queit. theyre perfect together. PLEASE add another chapter. if u do, ill give u a shino cookie! (waves shino cookie b4 author's eyes)

Genkai-chan chapter 1 . 9/8/2006
Cute, I'm getting used to this pair cause it is screaming at me!
Sonar chapter 1 . 9/2/2006
good story.
Szabotage chapter 1 . 8/16/2006
Another excellent story! You write Shino and Hinata both very well.
Gemzy chapter 1 . 8/15/2006

That is so sweet.

Are you gonna make a second chappie?

My 4 fav couples for Hinata are:

Shino and Hinata

Kiba and Hinata

Neji and Hinata and finally

Sasuke and Hinata.

I hate the Naruto and Hinata pairing, Hinata should go with someone who actually knows she's there.

Anyway great story, keep up the good work!

Peace out '_
rrlaupo chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
oh...i lurve you!beautiful story...*hug*
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