Reviews for Falling Even Deeper
MysticPhantom chapter 9 . 3/3/2007

again cuteness...

hehe... you really are a good writer..

keep it going

MysticPhantom chapter 8 . 3/3/2007
ill vote for that... this has to be one of the better ones ive read.. props

MysticPhantom chapter 7 . 3/3/2007
again with the cuteness..

MysticPhantom chapter 6 . 3/3/2007
oh cute...


nice touch

MysticPhantom chapter 5 . 3/3/2007

MysticPhantom chapter 4 . 3/3/2007

ok im calm.. but im loving the story..

MysticPhantom chapter 3 . 3/3/2007
good good.. hmm...

twisty a bit..

MysticPhantom chapter 2 . 3/3/2007
interesting.. interesting.

MysticPhantom chapter 1 . 3/3/2007
hehe.. cute..

ill continue

Velvet Flame chapter 9 . 3/1/2007
*squeals!* omgosh they are so cute _.. lol it was weird for a minute there i thought buffy was going to be having sex with faith instead of riley.. that would have been.. quite an entertaning change.. i think it would have changed alot of stuff though.. in turn.. making you have to go alot more into it then you did.. so i understand you keeping it the way it was.. though that thing with buffy looking at a picture of faith was awesome _.. ok.. i'll go be quiet now _.. update soon
Deleting123456 chapter 9 . 2/26/2007
I never really read Tallow fiction because I figure I can just watch the show. So this is the first one I've read. I'm glad I decided to check it out! Now I will be willing to read other tallow stories.I really like this chapter with its cut Willow and Tara goodyness. It was funny how you have the beginning with Xander and Anya's sex talk in the icecream truck and Buffy being absoutley distracted. I can't believe Buffy & RIley still had that stupid sex-a-thon! What about Faith. I bet Buffy is confiliced isn't she and now Riley will be following her around like a love sick pup. Should make for a good story lne. Anywayz, I can't wait till you update.


"Hey Catie, got Kittens?"
MiniShrink chapter 9 . 2/24/2007
"I mean, if she hadn't of been influenced by the house"

Should be "if she hadn't have been". Typo aside, I really loved this chapter, particularly the end of it. (I was hoping for a "You mean you want a non-stop sex-fest?" "Can I say yes?" "Depends who with" kind of ending really, but meh) But those two seriously need some more action :P Also, you won't be stoppingthis story once NMR is over will you? I LOVE this story, so naturally you can't do that. I'd especially love to see you filling in the gaps in Family - we don't actually know what went on during Tara's past.

Love your story, but you should really try to write longer chapters.
Halfreck3929 chapter 9 . 2/22/2007
i hate riley plz have faith wake up so we can have the 2 of them together
Halfreck3929 chapter 4 . 2/22/2007
i hope she wakes up and soon
MiniShrink chapter 8 . 1/19/2007
I really, really love this story, and you will update now if you wish to live.
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