Cute, but Saiyuki takes place in China. Unlike America, it's perfectly fine for an adult to keep living with their parents in asian countries. So, it was sorta pointless to tell Goku to leave since he's an adult. You should probably do some more research.

That monkey wit can never be beat! Truly a wonderful oneshot :D

Great story! It's really nice to see a bit more mature goku as opposed to the crazy one we always see. I wouldnt give up that goku for the world you understand, but this is a nice change in pace. And I don't think goku will ever realize just how much of an affect he has on Sanzo. It just would be wrong to have one without the other you know?

Your avid reader,

Humi

Awesome story. I liked it a lot.

I really enjoyed this. It's a very nice look at Sanzo and Goku.

Cute. It was well written and discriptive. Good work.

Weird, cute, whimsical, and sweet. A lovely little mood piece. Carn the Goku & Sanzo friendship fics!

Interesting...very interesting. I like the way that it was written, for sure. I especially like the way that you brought out Goku's intelligence, rather than demean it. After all, he's simply naive and childlike, not stupid. *grins* Good work. Keep writing.

i simply love your work. It's thought-provoking when most of the rest is bland and one-dimensional. keep up the good work, and i'm still waiting for an update on Raising Kouryuu!

_ ~*(Cyh)*

I love it!

That's exactly in character!

I love the way they act. That's just perfect!

But I wonder if Goku could really outlive Sanzô.

Now he's on earth, he seems to age as every human, isn't he?

This was just precious. Some of the wording seemed a bit off for Goku, but it was wonderful and I don't really give a damn. It's nice to see someone not write him as completely stupid, because he isn't. He just looks at the world and says, "Aw... pretty!" while Sanzo's all like, "Fuck this!" So cute...

For a second, I thought this was gonna lean a little yaoi, but then I remembered who was writing it and quickly relaxed into a very nice one shot where nobody hooks up and it's all just about them as two people who are 'friends'. Very nicely done.

Loved it, nice to read something different and true.

Ehh! SO CUTE! ,

Aw! Cute!