|Reviews for Home|
| Sunruner chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
Ah! Finally something introspective for Ivan that isn't horrendously written! Quite the opposite, really. _
I'm so glad I found this: I like the character building on the relationships as well, the game really seems to ignore Hammet after the first book, but I think Ivan had it harder than anyone D:
| SnowRoseQueen chapter 1 . 12/2/2006
It's really nice...
| helium lost chapter 1 . 8/13/2006
How is it that you write for all the fandoms I like/liked? XD Anyway, the first drabble is lovely—fantastically written; descriptive and introspective without being self-pitying. Also, the line "people liked things that had no use" is -so- true; I have tons and tons of junk all over my house XD
I like how you did your descriptions in I; they're vivid, yet concise. Though I don't remember adepts being condemned in the GS world, but, then again, I haven't played in probably more than a year _ ; Your use of italics in IV is done well, too, as it is in II; it shows how Ivan is reminiscing without plunging him into your usual cliche introspection :P
I -love- the closure in VI; it ends very nicely and wraps up the continuity of the fic perfectly. Beautifully, beautifully written; this will stay on my favorites for quite a while :)
| Spirit Seer chapter 1 . 7/19/2006
Hey, this is nice! :D I really liked it; the last sentence especially, about how there's nothing wrong with having two homes? I loved it! Nice job! I really like this :D
| SilverFinDragon chapter 1 . 7/16/2006
nice story, sligthly hard to understand because of the changes in the times but still really beautifully written, )
| Hawki chapter 1 . 7/16/2006
This was beautifully written. Truely insightful.