Reviews for Marrow |
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![]() ![]() Smexy snuggles. Sasuke truly should be deranged so well done on that front. |
![]() ![]() Dang so good I forgot about the seal being removed and I remember Sasuke turning up earlier so I'm happy |
![]() ![]() The confusion! And we remember her that Sakura truly is a prisoner |
![]() ![]() Progressinggggg |
![]() ![]() It is already saucy. Like,,, he likes to touch. He's already decided to dedicate himself to her Now I am not regretting missing my nap for this |
![]() ![]() Kabuto's creepy crush on her was obvious early on, you're so clever. The amount of work sakura did was well explained |
![]() ![]() So when your fav author is missing you come back and read her more serious works... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love slow burns but I'm also so impatient LOL. I know it'll be worth the wait even tho I want Sakura to jump his bones already |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sakura you dumbass. Why in the fuck do you care if KABUTO of all people thinks you're not professional by being close with Kimimaru. Please stop letting kabuto cock block you for the love of god |
![]() ![]() ![]() are you hinting maybe the curse seal is what made Kimimaru sick? If so that 100% feels believable |
![]() ![]() please continue this amazing story please |
![]() ![]() ![]() Don't listen to the review of the last guest talking shit, their greatest flaw is their inability to see that it's portrayed the same way on the anime... Fucking jerk! This is a greeeeeeat story, one I hope beyond hope you get back to |
![]() ![]() Mhm, the greatest flaw of this story is that it is so obvious this was written by some girl lost in her fantasy about romance and unicorns. Orochimaru bad. Konoha good. - kind of mentality with utter disregard for the fact that Konoha is running a mercenary business with assassination, infiltration, and seduction involved. The words this author is putting into the characters' mouths are just ridiculous. Orochimaru killed 23 people, goody! What are we gonna do? ... Konoha kills hundreds daily. And nobody cares. What makes them so much better than Orochimaru? I just... I can ignore these things in stories when they are not focused on. But the way this author is trying to portray a righteous image of Konoha... I find it ridiculous. |
![]() ![]() ![]() looking forward to the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dundundun... Kimimaro came to the Leaf village! I wonder how Orochimaru and Kabuto and Sasuke will retaliate? Also you mentioned something so unique and cool. It was about Kaguya having the ability to be able to know where his bones are, and that's how he tracked down Sakura... is that an original skill you created for him or an existing skill? I'm not sure if I'll get around to checking the wiki about this but was just curious :) that's so cool! |