|Reviews for The Dark Wars|
| Thug-4-Less chapter 1 . 8/12/2006
This is a pretty short one but the ideas it opens up are very exciting. I take it that you're trying to come up with a timeline for a story about the Dark Wars and this Captain Talis. Excellent! I must admit I enjoy when other people attempt Drakan fanfiction.
The only problem I have with the chapter is at the beginning. When the monk is speaking its mixed in with the body of the paragraph. It makes his speech harder to make out than necessary.
Anyway, hope you have much success in your endeavors.
| Seneti chapter 1 . 8/7/2006
Hm... some spelling errors, but a nice idea you have here. Waiting for another chapter