Reviews for Fall of a Phoenix
Guest chapter 3 . 7/29/2017
Three chapters into the story- love it! However there are a few times were I felt rushed; I don't think this is as much as the story line as it is the grammar though (sry XP). There are many parts where I have had to reread to see get the correct sense of the sentence. I think the main problem here may be extensive runon sentences. Other than that, I love your ideas and how the story is going! :)
Billi-Jade774 chapter 15 . 6/11/2017
I loved this. I almost cried at the end.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/8/2017
Too bad they didn't kill the muggle bastards!
Qtsarahanne chapter 15 . 4/5/2017
Cute story, thanks for writing it.
Lauren Saint chapter 15 . 9/26/2016
Loved the story! Great plot and it was really enjoyable read! :D
old enough to no better chapter 15 . 7/13/2016
I liked your story and is it years later? Would have liked to see a bit more of the Olde Magic though. Thank you
thephoenixandthedragon4ever chapter 15 . 2/12/2016
Really appreciated thus story.
Sly the gratsulover117 chapter 15 . 1/23/2016
so Tom never died?
lol, i absolutly loved this story :)
Stasia Ravenclaw chapter 15 . 7/24/2015
loved it

S. Ravenclaw
videthestripper chapter 15 . 7/19/2015
This was an amazing story! Thank you for writing it c:
Mangaqueen1158 chapter 15 . 7/3/2015
Your stories are amazing and have the most wonderful twists and lots to them. I hope you continue writing new stories, they are amazing.
Mangaqueen1158 chapter 2 . 7/3/2015
Did you write the spell backwards?
LadyRainDancer chapter 15 . 5/4/2015
This was another excellent story, with a well tied up epilogue, unlike jkr's epilogue which left me confused. I hope you update your other stories someday
naniwoiutennen chapter 2 . 3/28/2015
Lol lovely choice. I immediately began reading backwards when I saw "Sracsg nileudy awaekat, sdnuowelt tabeht laeh"

Heal the battle wounds, take away dueling scars.

Clever.
Guest chapter 15 . 3/9/2015
I greatly appreciate the time you took to write this story. It was very well done, and I enjoyed it immensely.
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