|Reviews for Fall of a Phoenix|
| daithi4377 chapter 15 . 2/4
I really liked this story it was different enough to catch attention but had names and enough details to make it believable. Only thing is you never said how old Tom was when he died.
| daithi4377 chapter 7 . 2/4
I notice the hat never mentioned his name...also wondered if it mentioned his true name at eleven or the made up name of Harry Potter. Also why was their no outcry of the death of Harry Potter. And will that cause a hassle at gringotts.
| daithi4377 chapter 6 . 2/4
LOL I'm not surprised but it will be interesting to see hoe His father reacts to who it is. At least it is to someone they both trust.
| daithi4377 chapter 2 . 2/4
Well all those death eaters are going to be embarrassed when they find out that not only were they defeated by a teenager but a teenager that fought even everyone one right after the other for hours while damaged but weeks, years of physical abuse. And he tied with the dark lord, just think if he had been as healthy and whole as they were.
| blacksabretooth chapter 2 . 12/22/2013
The spell used to remove battle wounds and scars is english but backwards lol
| Kitty Savella chapter 1 . 11/25/2013
This story is riddled with grammatical errors, such as incorrect punctuation, run-on sentences and misspellings. The site rules clearly state that it is the duty of every author to ensure the highest quality of work possible. If you are not capable of correcting the mistakes yourself, you need to find someone else who can. I don't enjoy the necessity of reviews like this, as it takes away from my enjoyment of the plot. I felt as though you might have had something, but the execution was too poor to allow the idea to shine. A bit of polishing up would probably do this story wonders.
| Guest chapter 15 . 10/30/2013
so cute... well written
| adafrog chapter 15 . 10/12/2013
Lovely story, thanks.
| 13girlsrule chapter 15 . 8/6/2013
that last bit was really wonderful. it was full of feeling and was well thought out. you are an amazing writer. keep going!
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/5/2013
That was sooooo awesome! :-D And his fight with voldemort ended in a tie. I'm getting that nervous/giddy feeling.
| rowenasheir chapter 15 . 5/16/2013
Good story. Could be expanded though if you have the time
| Obscured Angel chapter 15 . 4/16/2013
I enjoyed readying this story very much.
I like the way the 'Dark' and 'Light' sides were actually reversed in a way.
The old Magick was a very creative concept.
I love the way the story was written and structured.
Thanks for writing and posting.
| My Alternate Reality chapter 15 . 4/5/2013
| becca chapter 15 . 3/31/2013
I really loved they way you took and twisted the Voldemort part. The story is great and i enjoyed reading it thanks for all your hard work :)
| Guest chapter 15 . 2/7/2013
That was amazing, I loved it