Reviews for Right Before Your Eyes
africaflower77 chapter 1 . 8/21
Ahhh whyyyy! But wait Richard is only Louis's fiancée sooooo that means "..."
anafinchel chapter 1 . 5/30
awesome!
delete-account-please 5149757 chapter 1 . 11/26/2013
really excellent story it was cute.
delete-account-please 4171342 chapter 1 . 11/22/2013
Really good story it was cute
kami kyuubi sama chapter 1 . 6/16/2013
This series needs an epilogue.
Peacebunnie chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
I love all the fics in this series, but this is easily my favorite. _
Flip the Hrglass chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
screw you now. I'm hurting too much. :P
TeraWatt chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
That is one of the things you HAVE TO love about Richard White. He is GENUINELY a good man. H probably knows that Jason isn't his son but he loves him like he is his own. He doesn't get all possessive about Lois and you know that if she left him for EITHER Clark OR Superman, he wouldn't hold a grudge or be resentful to any of them.

Well done, I enjoyed it emencely

TeraWatt
madcloisfan chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
Loved it. Please continue
goldacharmed chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
Nooo! You can't end it there!
delete-account-please 742011 chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
this is thebestestfriendsforever just moved to a different account.

good chapter.
Lmb111514 chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
This was great, please keep writing great things like this!
Mouserocks-nerd chapter 1 . 5/16/2011
Dont know if i've reviewed this before, but I had to say it: this was heart-wrenchingly good! You have a really good way of drawing your readers into the emotions of each character.

- SJT (Mouserocks-nerd ;P )
Maki-P chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
Richard figure out everything?... Poor guy...

Also I notice this thing is from 2k6. Is there a chance of continuing sometime in the future? (Please say yes!)
wisecurledqueen chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
This is very sad. But I loved it. Thanks for for this masterpiece of a story.

-curledruler
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