|Reviews for Rune Soldier The Continuation|
| Timeless Miracle chapter 1 . 9/15/2012
please since your such a good writer do a multi chapter "from our into theirs" kind a fanfic with a marine or a navy seal?
| all forms of fluff chapter 31 . 5/7/2012
I have to say GrizzlyBiscuit this was by far the best Rune Soldier story I have ever read. Now don't get you hopes too high, it is also the only one I have read, I guess people don't really apishiate the awsomeness that is Louie. The fight sceans were a bit hetic for me to follow but they did make a great read. The drama, what bit there was, between Louie and the girls was funny and Melissa's bath scean stole the show for me. I alsmot busted a gut when Conrad came in. Not that I have a loli fetish or anything but Merril kinda got screwed in the love department, and not in the good and happy kinda way. Well she did get a kiss which is more then the other two...inless you count Ginnie getting felt up after their night on the town. I would recamend reading the Mahou Senshi Louie light novles and any manga you can fine on it should you make a sequle. Mainly becasue Louie isn't nearly as incompatant in them, but aslo becasue there is charter development with Gennie and Merrle that dosn't come up in the Anime. Well I am just writing this to let you know that I truly did enjoy this story and would like you to know that I would love to read your take on a retelling of the series with maybe a more Manga take on Louie...Its just a thought. :D
| NeilDingley chapter 31 . 5/12/2010
Great story, but what no touching happy reunion for our heroes, no steam love scene :-(, surelly there must be a sequel planned to address these missing essentials.
| sissyHIYAH chapter 1 . 5/15/2009
Okay, first chapter and I'm hooked. I'll leave an indepth review in a few chapters, but until then, I'll be busy reading. I hope you understand.
| Hououza chapter 31 . 4/15/2008
There isn't much more I can say, truely that was a magnificent work and one I enjoyed greatly.
In answer to your comments I would say that a great novelist needs only two things, to enjoy their work and to seek for others to enjoy it. Sequels are for the publishers and other groups who seek to make money of the writers imagination.
That was a wonderful piece, and I greatly enjoyed being able to read it.
Good luck & best wishes,
| Darren Alston chapter 31 . 11/1/2007
Very good story. I liked it. A very anime-ish ending too.
| Flaming Man of Iron chapter 31 . 9/26/2007
Hmm. I read this in two days. I was wanting more of a proper ending to the series, and this story does a decent job. The story itself is good, though I really would have liked to see the romantic loose ends of the series tied up a bit tighter.
Otherwise, awesome! Great job on the 100k story! :)
| Duke of no Money chapter 31 . 9/23/2007
It's always good if sad to read the end to a fanfic that you really that you liked my idea the best and thankyou for making the first Rune Soldier harem fanfic.
| Dragonwiles chapter 31 . 9/2/2007
It's been an exciting adventure. I think it was a good idea to make the ending low-key. It feels appropriate after the powerful fight scenes and emotions of the previous chapters. The story concludes well.
| Dragonwiles chapter 30 . 8/18/2007
The fight scene was excellent, and it developed in ways that I didn't expect at all. I thought the last half of the chapter was done very well also, using understatement to help us understand how awful the situation is.
| jagaer chapter 29 . 7/22/2007
I really liked Rune Soldier. I was disappointed ADV did not go past volume 4. I was sorry there were only 24 episodes of the Anime. I have always wondered what happened next. This si a very entertaing bit of fanfiction. Please keep it up.
Oh I have always though Louie was real Rjarl and Aunt Jenny's illegitimate son. Ther eare hints I think at least in the anime.
| Dragonwiles chapter 29 . 7/21/2007
The fighting is very exciting. It's not going at all as I had expected, but that's what is making it suspenseful.
| Ransumi chapter 28 . 6/23/2007
If your planning on any pairings, why not just let all the girls have Louie?
| Snipersnake111 chapter 28 . 6/11/2007
This is pretty good. There aren't many Rune Soldier fanfics out there and yours is probably one of the best I've seen. You are doing a great job of keeping the characters in... well... in character. It's nice to see Louie getting better at fighting and casting magic. As far as who Louie should end up with romatically, I would have to vote for Melissa. It just makes the most sense for it to be her over the other girls. Anway I have rambled on enough so keep up the good work and update soon.
| Metacarius chapter 28 . 5/19/2007
Got a good thing going here. Just read through the whole thing. It's good to see somebody who has some patience in their writing. Such a rare thing, especially here.
I can't really say anything in the way of evaluation. Your characters are on, plot is solid, basics are solid... Just keep doing what you're doing!
As for who he should be with/go for?
Well... aside from you seeming to have a direction you're going and probably had it figured out about 10 chapters ago... P
I would say Melissa. After all, there's a reason he was chosen to be her champion. On the other hand, Rjarl didn't marry Jenny... or did he? Never was all that clear (or I'm forgetting something). But Melissa's had such a huge personal investment (for better or worse... usually worse) since the beginning, it would be a shame for her to not come out as the primary relation.
Good job! Keep up the good work!