Reviews for Silent Snow
Link Fangirl01 chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
I could spot the usage of symbolism, and it was skillfully done.

This is quite the masterful oneshot.
sina chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
hi there

i really liked the story, i hope you'll write more :)

but... i really did not get that snow-meliting-drop-thing there, i'm sorry :( can u probably explain that to me? again, i'm sorry...
crystalwolfberri chapter 1 . 10/29/2007
we're talkin bout symbols in lit right now, but i don't get thse symbols in here, sorry. mayb i'll reread it then.

but very good, thank you! poor kratos, wantin to talk to his son but he can't. sigh
Dreamer's Samhain chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
aw! that was so sweet! Poor Kratos. Poor Lloyd!
IreIreIre chapter 1 . 10/12/2006
I love KratosxLloyd fics! And yours is very delicate and really well written. _ Good job!
Vestalie chapter 1 . 9/22/2006
hello i love your story! but, I didn't unterstand the fing with the snows molten in the Lloyd's hand it's probably because I'm french... so, if you can explain me with simple words, it would be really friendly

kingcael chapter 1 . 8/6/2006
Symbolism is a beautiful thing.

That was truly beautiful. I loved it so much. Fatherson bonding is just awesome and you make a smashing example of someone who can take a metaphor and throw it into the mix of articulate beauty.

Again, loved it.

Love and kisses,

Lyra the Heretic chapter 1 . 7/26/2006

Yay Kratos.

The piece is nicely written.
Sapphire-luna232 chapter 1 . 7/24/2006
*stares in a daze*

Geez... are you sure you don't write for a living? That was so... I can't even find the word I'm looking for. Not 'professional-like', 'clean', or 'wonderfully written' by themselves... but kind of a mix of all of them, with a really big emotional punch that only a ToS fan would really be able to appreciate. You always wrap everything up so nicely, too. I think that's a pretty rare quality in a writer, especially when they do fanfiction.

Waiting for more Kratos/Lloyd goodness,

lloyd-forever chapter 1 . 7/18/2006
Aww this is a really good oneshot! Probably one of the best. Yay! ok that's it I'm adding you to the my list of Saints for the Church of Lloyd! Lol ok you should write more like this! This is solid work ;)
Heisui chapter 1 . 7/18/2006
That was perfect. I can't think of anything bad, everything was great. _

Ark Navy chapter 1 . 7/17/2006
Wow... It's like a cut scene! I can see it so clearly! Beautiful... so pristine...


::is actually speechless for once::
Space Cadet Skip chapter 1 . 7/17/2006
Whoa! You're such a descriptive writer! Really I liked it a whole lot!
Serenity Aur chapter 1 . 7/17/2006
This is very nice. I love the way you write! It's so eloquent and descriptive. Just awesome.

As for the symbolism, I think I got it the moment I finished reading it. (I think I usually catch these things...)

Um, one was that "life-giving" phrase, meaning Kratos is Lloyd's father.

Also that I thought was nice that the drop is like an angel's tear.(Kratos cries for his mistakes...? That's what I understood)

Anyway, great story!
ChaosAkita chapter 1 . 7/17/2006
Ok, first for the not-so-great part of my review.

Um...why did you use "He continued leaving prints in the once flawless land." Shouldn't land be ground? Maybe it's just me, but land makes me think of a larger area.

Also, the author's note at the end was weird. It makes me wonder what symbolism was used in the story and then it makes me fustrated for the next few days because I can't figure it out. (I tend to think of things over time) And it just stands out weird.

Now, for the nice part.

Aw! This was so fluffy! And I got extremelyguilty!Kratos. Keep up the good work!
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