Reviews for A Beast Within
skywalker05 chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
Wow. "“I thawt you was a monster, daddy.”" and ""My… children,” he spits the word as if it were a curse, “were like them.”Jedi…" Wow. A touching story, incredibly creepy. Well written also; you rein your words in, unlike in "Hoth". Excellent work. I presume it takes place between episodes 3 and 4?
kiku65 chapter 1 . 11/2/2007
Dark, very dark. And more than a little disturbing. Perhaps a move to the horror section? Good work in any case...