Reviews for Right Before His Eyes
emachookie chapter 1 . 4/13/2013
Man, that was... I am left with no words, no words ood enough Ai think. This is amazing. The emotions, the scenes, the feelings, it was all so clear and beautiful. I love how you characterized Neji, but seriously, Tenten was way more epic.
Animefangirl95 chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
Haha nice:)

I was so upset when I heard she was leaving! And I was all panicked along with Neji haha
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 1 . 4/27/2012
Aww poor neji, like the ending
Uchihaflower14 chapter 1 . 6/20/2011
Aaaaw! This made me get all choked up! I love it! I was so mad at Tenten for leaving Neji though! It's soo sad it burns! Great job!
lady-insane-2004 chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
GOOD JOB
Crazycally chapter 1 . 5/30/2011
I like this story, TenTen alwas was under aprecated
always-kh chapter 1 . 1/7/2011
that was nicely written and told.
yamikinoko chapter 1 . 11/15/2010
Ohmuhgah-the emotion in this piece was absolutely crazy! I think I forgot to breathe a couple [okay, a lot!] of times in the course of the fic-you wove their emotions together seamlessly! It was pretty close to perfect, imo-fabulous job!

[And it helped a lot that they were in character, even in situations that they haven't been in in the actual series.]
KRISTINA JANOSEVIC chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
I am completely TEXTLESS! This is the most beautiful story of the all the best stories, something like"MISS STORY-WORLD FOR AT LEAST 1000 YEARS" Step by step, you were slowly showing us their feelings. Second, you did not write "killable" long chapterS, and I like that the most. Thirdly, I am going to kill you if you do not write sequel. besides, you mentioned that Neji told that she was untouchable...for now. So LEMON-SEQUEL PLEEEEEEASE! I am so warmed-up for this story! Anyway, !:DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
Just Lovely chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
It was kinda funny at the end but all the other parts was just really sweet.
MsRockergirl95 chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
This is such a cute story...I loved it!
FenixPhoenix chapter 1 . 4/30/2009
I really like the description used here as well as the plot. Indeed, you never know what you have until you lose it, right? Good job.
Killing Kunoichi chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
Wow! i even thought that tenten would be leaving neji
Similarly different chapter 1 . 12/15/2008
i like this one a lot
OSYH chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
I really loved reading this! Ending surprised me a bit since I never thought to consider other shinobi Temari would've wanted *shrug* Ah well, thanks for the story and the fluff! XD
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