|Reviews for Chocolate Covered Pancakes|
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/12/2013
O.K. How long do Naruto's average flings last? Think about that.
| Alxandr4 chapter 1 . 7/18/2013
1. Don't leave a cliff hanger
2. I love chocolate ._.
But everything else amazing story, and your kinky.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
I just loved akamaru's POV :3
| Pancake Lover chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
YEAH! I love Chocolate
| Labradoodles1001 chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
OMG! That was really good! I normally don't like kibaxnaruto but I think this story has changed my mind. Please continue writing like this. It makes my day. Good job!
| violetkisses chapter 1 . 5/19/2010
there should be a seeequueeel.
| einjuru333 chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
i loved it ., wish it would have continued though
| lord kiras hand chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
aww come on! all that and no lemon!...my nose started to blead for nothing T-T
| YaoiWolf chapter 1 . 8/10/2008
MAKE MORE KIBAXNARU. you have addicted me and now you must supply my newest smut addiction with your work. that was a lovely oneshot but i wish there was more substance and lemon to it. though i have room to talk.(stupid friggen story im trying to write).
| Kudasai-Ai-Watashi Mo chapter 1 . 12/23/2007
wow this is so kawii i havent been on fanfiction in months and this is the first story i read and it was great i loved it cant wait to read more of your stories
| Kyuubiluver chapter 1 . 11/29/2007
Aw, so kawwii!
| KaptenHaddock chapter 1 . 10/13/2007
Okej, really cute and so... But I, and I don't think I'm alone, would like a little more then just a closed door in our faces. Because I really think you came up with a very good story wich has the potential of becoming a spectacular lemon with just a few lines more.
| Wren Wild chapter 1 . 10/11/2007
this is -great-! i'm preety sure its sfe to say you don't like her very much, so call her "Parasite" Hilton, it fits doesn't it?
| Pashe chapter 1 . 9/20/2007
Pashe: *Drools* How can you just stop there? What could have possibly happened that you couldn't have wrote it in the story.
Naruto: *Whispers in ear*
Pashe: Oh. Oh. OH. Why didn't he write that Naru-chan?
Naruto: Because maybe it is because of the fact that...
Kiba: -YOU ARE THIR-F*CKING-TEEN!
Pashe: So, the author is fourteen.
Kiba: ...Yeah...Well...YOU STINK!
Naruto: Stop being rude before I go and make bail on Sasuke.
Kiba: You are SO sexy when you are threatening.
Naruto: ...well, is that so? Let's see how sexy I really am.
Kiba and Naruto: *Haves sex*
Pashe: ...Can you say something for me?
Pashe: YOUTUBE! *Runs off with camera*
Kiba: You $$hole.
Naruto: No, this is a good thing.
Naruto: Because now we have something to watch while we do it.
Kiba: Hm. Kinky aren't we?
Naruto: I don't know, you tell me. Or show me.
Kiba: With pleasure.
Kiba and Naruto: *Commences round two*
Pashe: *Sneaks behide them* This is gold.
Seriously make a sequel.
| Aka Kingyo chapter 1 . 8/19/2007
lmao, love akamaru's POV, the chocolate added a nice touch too 3