Reviews for Chocolate Covered Pancakes
Guest chapter 1 . 11/12/2013
O.K. How long do Naruto's average flings last? Think about that.
Alxandr4 chapter 1 . 7/18/2013
1. Don't leave a cliff hanger
2. I love chocolate ._.
But everything else amazing story, and your kinky.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
I just loved akamaru's POV :3
Pancake Lover chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
YEAH! I love Chocolate
Labradoodles1001 chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
OMG! That was really good! I normally don't like kibaxnaruto but I think this story has changed my mind. Please continue writing like this. It makes my day. Good job!
violetkisses chapter 1 . 5/19/2010
there should be a seeequueeel.
einjuru333 chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
i loved it ., wish it would have continued though
lord kiras hand chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
aww come on! all that and no lemon! nose started to blead for nothing T-T
YaoiWolf chapter 1 . 8/10/2008
MAKE MORE KIBAXNARU. you have addicted me and now you must supply my newest smut addiction with your work. that was a lovely oneshot but i wish there was more substance and lemon to it. though i have room to talk.(stupid friggen story im trying to write).

Much love,

Okami Yasha
GarlicPop chapter 1 . 12/23/2007
wow this is so kawii i havent been on fanfiction in months and this is the first story i read and it was great i loved it cant wait to read more of your stories
Kyuubiluver chapter 1 . 11/29/2007
Aw, so kawwii!
KaptenHaddock chapter 1 . 10/13/2007
Okej, really cute and so... But I, and I don't think I'm alone, would like a little more then just a closed door in our faces. Because I really think you came up with a very good story wich has the potential of becoming a spectacular lemon with just a few lines more.
Wren Wild chapter 1 . 10/11/2007
this is -great-! i'm preety sure its sfe to say you don't like her very much, so call her "Parasite" Hilton, it fits doesn't it?

great oneshot!
Pashe chapter 1 . 9/20/2007
Pashe: *Drools* How can you just stop there? What could have possibly happened that you couldn't have wrote it in the story.

Naruto: *Whispers in ear*

Pashe: Oh. Oh. OH. Why didn't he write that Naru-chan?

Naruto: Because maybe it is because of the fact that...


Pashe: So, the author is fourteen.

Kiba: ...Yeah...Well...YOU STINK!

Naruto: Stop being rude before I go and make bail on Sasuke.

Kiba: ...

Naruto: ...What?

Kiba: You are SO sexy when you are threatening.

Naruto: ...well, is that so? Let's see how sexy I really am.

Kiba and Naruto: *Haves sex*

Pashe: ...

Kiba: What?

Pashe: ...

Kiba: What?

Pashe: ...

Kiba: WHAT?

Pashe: ...Can you say something for me?

Kiba: What?

Pashe: YOUTUBE! *Runs off with camera*

Kiba: You $$hole.

Naruto: No, this is a good thing.

Kiba: How?

Naruto: Because now we have something to watch while we do it.

Kiba: Hm. Kinky aren't we?

Naruto: I don't know, you tell me. Or show me.

Kiba: With pleasure.

Kiba and Naruto: *Commences round two*

Pashe: *Sneaks behide them* This is gold.



Seriously make a sequel.
Aka Kingyo chapter 1 . 8/19/2007
lmao, love akamaru's POV, the chocolate added a nice touch too 3
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