|Reviews for Avatar|
| Eberhardt chapter 1 . 2/13
Try and try as I might, I can *not* get through this first chapter. And for just a single thing.
Why in the hell are you using Tim Drake?! The Robin from the show is explicitly Dick Grayson, even if he *is* a composite character between the first three. He may have Tim's Suit, but he has Dick's Name and Background, and I cannot, for the life of me, understand how any fan of the show dedicated enough to write a trilogy 700k words long does not know that.
| Niftu Cal chapter 32 . 2/6
Usually I don't like songs woven into stories, but holy crap. That was awesome.
This whole story has been fantastic. I love how you captured each of the main characters, and I never would have guessed that OCs could be done in a such a seamless way that truly enhances each character. The fights are epic, the slow evolution of Robin's character under the influence of the symbiote is insidiously slow and well wrought, and the team drama is real without being over the top.
If I had to offer any advice, the only thing I can really think of is that Starfire's rape was really glossed over. In my experience, those things never really leave a woman; they only can learn how to heal and move on. It didn't seem right that no one, especially Robin, would even broach the topic with her.
| Smiling Seshat chapter 11 . 2/10/2016
Techman was a well thought-out villain that really drove home the urgency the heroes felt in this arc to protect the children.
| Ferdiad chapter 40 . 12/13/2013
| anthropomorphizer chapter 40 . 7/16/2013
An amazing story. You managed to capture the personalities of the Titans perfectly, while at the same time maintaing the seriousness this story requires. I can't wait to read the sequels - excellent job!
| Guest chapter 40 . 6/7/2013
I started reading this story a chapter at a time but around chapter 10, I just sat down and decided to ignore everything till I got through all 40 chapters (although school and work got in the way :(). I really like how Terra is depicted here; this is probably the best characterization of her I've seen outside the show. I have to say that every word and every scene was an absolute pleasure to read, and I can't wait to start on 'Adaptation.'
| Page 14 chapter 14 . 6/7/2013
It's just superpowers yo. Beast Boy's powers don't need explanation. They're just powers. That's it.
| metahumans. LoL chapter 11 . 6/7/2013
Chapter 11 Check your plural yo.
| flairina chapter 7 . 6/4/2013
I went off on Google to check if Jason Hawke was a comic character and got a bunch of results about a gay porn actor. Just thought I'd let you know.
(But the story is awesome thus far too.)
| grimmich chapter 1 . 5/17/2013
ummmm I thought the Robin from teen titans was Dick Grayson...
| TwilightSparkle65 chapter 11 . 2/17/2013
I was referred here by a friend, who was in turn referred here by a link on a tvtropes page. You've probably gotten hundreds of similar reviews by now, but I would like to add my own to the chorus: the writing is stellar, the story is gripping, the continuity is impeccable, the oc characters are as real and interesting as any presented in the original works, and it is overall one of the most well-done fanfictions I have had the pleasure of reading. The only problem I've encountered is that I cannot seem to get through the fight scenes, but that is only the dense format of coupled with my own inability to envision it, something as an author you of course have no control over. I would assume that those with the ability to appreciate a fight scene find them just as satisfying of the rest of the work.
I look forward to reading the rest of this, as well as the sequel. Pat yourself on the back, for you have truly created a masterpiece.
| Star1412 chapter 32 . 2/3/2013
I love the format for this chapter!
| Star1412 chapter 30 . 2/3/2013
Your writing is awesome!
| Star1412 chapter 19 . 1/24/2013
This story's been awesome so far!
| Jozefski chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
"Every morning Tim Drake ceased to be, and every night he was reborn."
I know I neglected to give this story a review, having immediately jumped to Adaptation after reading it, but I just thought you should know something.
That quote from your story up there is the greatest opening line I have ever read in a TT fanfic. No, I'm not exaggerating. You have no idea how much of an impact that one sentence had on me when I first read this. That one, measley little collection of 13 words drew me into a roller-coaster ride that I'm glad I hopped on to.
Just thought you should know...