Reviews for Nightmare on Privet Drive
TheReapersDaughter chapter 7 . 11/29/2016
I wish you hadn't rushed this, the story could of been so good, it feels like there was more that could of been done with it.
A fan chapter 7 . 1/30/2016
WOW! Nice fic, aaand a kind Lucius.
XXxgirlblunderxX chapter 7 . 3/10/2015
This was great hope there's a sequel
crotia chapter 7 . 10/22/2013
thanks for the story
The Lonely God With a Box chapter 1 . 9/3/2013
This is actually really similar to a story I wrote so far...and I swear I didn't copy you.
Anonymus chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
I loved it! It was like Law & Order: Special Victims Unit and Harry Potter rolled into one awesome story! Tiny bit disturbing, but oh well! I like how you made Lucius like that, and even explained his actions. I think you should do one or more chapters explaining the trip with Draco and his father. It would definately clear things up a bit.
Lw117149 chapter 7 . 11/24/2012
interesting way to end it considering luc didn't want anyone to know he was at the house but it works... sequil?
Grimm-kitty-kun chapter 7 . 3/11/2012
This story had potential to be very good, but you ended it before any of the plotlines you'd introduced could be properly explored.

You tried to resolve rape trauma in three lines at the end of the story's last chapter. That's just bad writing. I'm not going to sit here and flame you, because it's rude, but honestly..this story was just getting good before you abruptly ended it without resolving any of the conflicts that you brought up.
JlovesGaara chapter 7 . 2/14/2012
Ya kinda rushed at the end, but otherwise a very good story! I am surprised you don;t have more reviews. Keep up the good work
LifeIsJustADreamForTheDead chapter 7 . 10/1/2011
intense... very morbid...
aliengirlguy chapter 7 . 4/9/2010
this was a good story, but it deffinatly feels unfinished.
hypercell chapter 3 . 6/11/2009
I don't think Malfoy would be able to get into the Dursley house. What about the wards?
hypercell chapter 2 . 6/11/2009
Petunia wouldn't call Harry Harry. She would call him boy or Potter
Snaky Black chapter 7 . 6/10/2009

I just signed up so that I can review this fiction.

I can't stand finish reading your fiction and then say nothing to you.

I live in Taiwan, still working hard learning English, so maybe my English is so poor for you to understand, but I'll try my best.

I LOVE your fiction so much!

Harry is such a CUTE boy!(P.S So does Robin XD)

I've never thought that Vernon could do this to Harry before!

But I finally accept it :p because to me, Vernon really did a great job And I like Lucius Malfoy in this fiction. He's not that bad compare to the one appear in novel, on the contrary, he looks like a good guy. I think that's nice.

All my limited English only allow me to type these words, but I really wish I can tell you how much I love your fiction, and how much I wish to read your new fiction again.

Uh, forgive my poor English, hope you can understand it.
Seacilin chapter 7 . 5/22/2009
Fantastic angst! Really disturbing rape scenes but the emotional impact of them was great. My only problem with this fic was the ending. There was so much potential for expansion. Secretly I'm glad because I thought this might turn into a Lucius!Harry fic (I don't like them), but a paragraph even,just at the end would have been preferable. Maybe a scene some years later at Lucius Death Eater trial, where Harry is in the audience, and Lucius whispers "Help me" to him would have been a better ending. Still, good work.
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