Reviews for To Live Nobly
Zanna Tinuviel chapter 1 . 10/25/2016
That was literally the saddest thing I've EVER read. In my entire life. Minus that one Doomsday fanfiction. It's masterfully crafted, in such an amazing, refreshing style! It took me a bit to latch onto it, but there's so much heartrending emotional turmoil, it makes me want to cry by the time I've figured it out!
I don't know how you do it. Honestly.
Izaranna chapter 1 . 8/30/2016
That last word killed me, and the hope I had that he'd recover was snuffed out and replaced with awe, because I can't imagine what that must FEEL like, to be that in love with someone that you keep coming back, not even knowing why but knowing that you need to. And to be so love in someone you're willing to forget them just so that they can live, and knowing that you'll never truly exist anymore but doing it anyway because the idea of you living a meaningless existence that you wish you could snuff out is infinitely more bearable than knowing there was a chance she could die.
And they love each other so much it's breaking them, and he NEVER knew her NAME. Did he ever find out?
I love how there isn't any dialogue until the very end, because it feels like you've just come out of a haze, that that is the only REAL moment in the world, because everything blurs into colours and sounds, but the harsh truth of this world doesn't.
And that Peter was still there was incongruous, until the end.
And that James had given up was unpalatable, until the end.
And that Sirius just let him waste away was ludicrous, until the end.
Your writing is stellar, and all I can do is aspire to be at least half the writer you are. Truly, you are a master wordsmith, and every accolade in the universe is not enough to quantify what feelings you've evoked in me.
Stunning, in a word.
mspstar97 chapter 1 . 8/15/2016
Nope nope nope nope nope...too painful! Beautifully written nonetheless
Daughter-of-athena-in-hogwarts chapter 1 . 8/11/2016
Really an ending like that really what happens help
Auntleona0 chapter 1 . 6/11/2016
I read this a few days ago and I didn't leave a review, but it's literally been haunting me ever since. So I thought I'd better come back and say that this is such a good, heartbreaking premise and really well-done. I like how you never used names to contribute to the anonymous, soul-crushing tone. Thanks for writing!
yanxxx chapter 1 . 4/26/2016
I read this before bedtime and I was shattered. After reading that last line I think I just froze and wallowed for awhile.
Your writing is amazing. As always! Thank you!
florafaunamerryweather chapter 1 . 4/25/2016
that was possibly the most painful thing ive ever read in my whole entire life i want to curl up into a tiny ball and cry forever omg
Dida chapter 1 . 4/11/2016
Why? Why would you do this to me? This is brilliant, heartbreakingly brilliant. I want more but I don't think I can handle it. It is just so sad
GrimOldPlace chapter 1 . 3/19/2016
What have you done? This is possibly the most heartbreaking thing I have ever read. The plot was brilliant and the ending made me want to curl up in a ball and die, but also the writing style delivered the narrative with the right feels. You wrote it so well. Is it even legal to read something so wonderful for free? I don't even know. I feel like I should be paying for this. I love everything you write. You're a gift to this fandom, thanks for sharing this story!
DolphinAunt30 chapter 1 . 3/2/2016
Oh man. Not cool. Not cool at all.
But great story. Sad and something James would totally do.
nilesalt chapter 1 . 12/8/2015
you have killed me. I went on a fic rec page and thought ooh this sounds good.
how wrong. my heart is now shattered. so much angst. so much. I think I'll just go and make another friend of mine read this and cry together.
but on the bright side (is there even a bright side to life after reading this?) your writing is amazing and very well developed. :)
Mestra chapter 1 . 9/6/2015
Possibly the saddest, angstiest fic I have ever read. You broke my heart into a million little pieces.
caileemoe chapter 1 . 7/8/2015
Always find myself stumbling back to this story. So beautiful, but it guts me every time. Well done.
Helena chapter 1 . 4/5/2015
Wow. I don't know what to say, except that this was brilliant. Wow. I'm speechles... Your aus are wonderful and heartbreaking and I don't understand how it is possible to write this well and get nothing for it. Keep writing because you're really good at it!
FandomCollision chapter 1 . 3/9/2015
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