|Reviews for The First Time|
| Ninety-Nine-More chapter 1 . 11/15/2007
How sad! Beautiful work, by the way, but how sad! Thanks for sharing this fic by putting it on Its always comforting to see good work.
| NO-ONE-IX chapter 1 . 4/9/2007
aww I thought that was oo kawaii!
| LittleBrick chapter 1 . 8/4/2006
this is a very very good writen story. short, but detailed.
| Vestibulocochlear chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
That was beautiful~ The simplicity and speed with which so much emotion is communicated makes it so powerful. And the take on characterization is excellent.