|Reviews for Chasing Destiny|
| Imwaiting4myAliceandEdward chapter 22 . 7/8
Interesting character use... could use some more support and buildup with the plot and relationship but not bad.
| purefaith91 chapter 22 . 1/17/2012
Excellent! Love that they listened to each other and owned up to their parts in keeping them apart. Also, that they got bonded before their baby was born. Since Draco had threatened to "get back at her", I would have liked to see some reference to his real marriage so that he could get his money. A very enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing. p
| purefaith91 chapter 18 . 1/17/2012
This is my favorite chapter so far. So much great in there. Love that SS is getting along with Hermione's parents so well and that Narcissa came through. You had to figure that she was also forced as LM is LM after all. Brilliant. p
| purefaith91 chapter 15 . 1/17/2012
Could Draco have had anything to do with switching the tea that caused the pregnancy so that the Malfoys could get revenge on SS for not backing LV? Of course, I could just love the conspiracy prospects. Loving the story. p
| purefaith91 chapter 8 . 1/17/2012
Oh boy, I suspect that Pomfrey confused the tea and gave SS Hermione's tea and vice versa; then SS threw it out the window. And we can guess where it went from there, huh? I wish someone would backhand Ron just once when he starts with that mouth. Hate to see SS hurt when he thought he was doing the right thing, even if it was kind of a spineless and not very smart thing to do. p
| purefaith91 chapter 3 . 1/17/2012
For someone as secretive of things that he feels would be embarrassing to him, Harry was a jerk for telling Ron, of all people about Hermione when he found her. And what did Ron expect her to say? With friends like them, it is no wonder she never liked any of the boys in her year. I think that Harry is worse than Harry in this case as you expect Draco to be a twerp. Oh, and not smart of SS...he should have been the one to tell her. How long does he think it will be until someone (malfoy) tells her it was Snape that raped her? Great story, so far. p
| JaneA0202 chapter 1 . 6/19/2011
really, another story with rape? are all people crazy or why it is so favourite theme in fanfictions? I dont understand... normally, I lose all interest to read that story...but I decided to give this story a chance, especially because it was Severus and because they love each other already...
Also I wish she was out of school, I think the story would work the same If she was an apprentice or even a professor instead of student.
chapter 2: I dont know If its good or bad that he didnt tell her...but it will make it interesting...
chapter 4: Im probably the only one, but I found that scene with Harry nad Ron really weird...but thats probably because I dont like Ron in general..and Harry isnt better either...If I was Hermione, I cant imagine telling them all of that and then crying with them..thats just weird...it made me feel like they were fourteen...
And overall they are both very annoying..sticking their noses into everything...
Oh well, I guess this is really not my cup of tea...I will not discuss it more, because there were many things I didnt like and I would feel bad for writting it...
| twilighter53121 chapter 15 . 8/18/2008
NO! Severus should be with me!
| nimath chapter 22 . 3/23/2008
Great story. Severus was a little ooc, but that's okay, I really liked him like this, showing emotions when he usually keeps them so bottled up. Thanks!
| o0vicarious-living0o chapter 22 . 11/1/2007
Aw... That was such a sweet story.
Bravo! *claps and cries*
| Eden Snape chapter 1 . 9/29/2007
A SCREW? lmao
| Eden Snape chapter 22 . 9/29/2007
| Jenny-Beth chapter 22 . 8/20/2007
This was wonderful! You did a fantastic job and I am so glad that I read it.
I'm curious; will there be a sequel, in which the male Malfoys would attempt their revenge? If not, I totally understand.
Keep on writing!
| Maddie50 chapter 22 . 8/9/2007
Together in love at last. Thank you for sharing your writing talent.
| slythrn-barnbum chapter 22 . 8/5/2007
great ending! i loved the story, and i hope you're going to continue writing, even with the events of dh. you're a great writer and i hope to read more from you soon!