In the end Neji still killed Sai, so Naruto had to get a replacement for the replacement.

This was funny, and I was very pleasantly surprised to see a reaction to sex-based humour from a female character that wasn't either stock-character exaggerated outrage, or ooc alpha-male-ego-pandering.

Fantastically done, although I wonder how long it's going to take Sai to figure out that sex is a taboo subject in a lot of circles... poor guy. In many ways, while many disagree, I think he'd have been a more interesting character than Sakura in the first series. There's so much scope there for actual character development, AND in character humorous situations! That's a precious commodity.

...and now I have an image in my head of Sai reading Icha Icha with Kakashi as research, taking notes all the while. ;)

ROFL, never get tired of sai...

What I want to know now is Neji's reaction to Tenten's nickname for Sai ;)

Hehe. Even though I've seen Sai and his nicknaming fics before, this concept was probably more original back when this particular one was published. But I really like the ending. (It was on someone's favs too, is how I found it.)

The limping and general battered state of the team in the start of the story gets kind of much attention when compared to the "quick setup" role it seems to play in the overall picture. I actually read another fic about Tenten's problem with the bickering of her teammates going to cause them all to get killed on a mission on the same day, and went "oh, this scene would have been right at home there too". :)

All in all it's nice and lighthearted, like the Ultimate Taijutsu Technique. Well-suited for my "reading random short fics" weekend. Thanks for this!

Really good job on this one-shot, poor Naru though XD. Well, at least Tenten didn't react like females tend to do... (although Neji did it for her...)

Ha ha... it's so funny! Sai sure has got something for stange-nicknaming, huh. Crazy names, kinda cute.

~SalHappySng

Sai never fails to amuse.

Haha! I knew Sai was going to call Tenten "Buns", but the ending really through me off-guard! XDDD Funny story you got there, funny story! XDDD

Sai's really cool! ) I love him! It's just so sad that Team Kakashi doesn't really appreciate him at all. He's more useful than Sakura, honestly. I know that when Sasuke will be back, Sai will be pushed aside.

Tenten is cool here too. It's just so sad that we barely know her in canon.

OMG! I was dying of silent laughter!

Oh my god! I love Tente!

Cyberwolf, I humbly worship at thy alter. (And pray you'll return to fanfiction one glorious day :D)

Is't tenten wonderfull?

Omg i got to give u props for this. it is AMAZING!