Reviews for Paying off Time
JOe chapter 1 . 2/27
Amazing :-) :-) :-)
brine chapter 1 . 9/7/2006
this was very different than what i expected. i also agree that i don't think manny would have killed himself, BUT i do appreciate the point of view. hope to see more of your stuff soon.
Glastea chapter 1 . 7/30/2006
An interesting idea- I'd never thought of this before. However, there was a name mix at some point- Brian to Barry, or is that just me misinterpreting.

For some reason though, I can't imagine Manny committing suicide. I always felt he'd die because someone thought he was too sarcastic, or something like that. Don't ask me why- just my perception of it.

I hope to see more of your writing around soon.
lina chapter 1 . 7/22/2006
neat take on why things turned out the way they did! i hope you write more GF fanfics. your perpsective is very interesting. :)