The good parts were really great. The slow parts were really slow…

Lovely story!

If only
If only…

Maul is weaker than Ventress at this point.

I'm just saying, without the war raging Sidious is a lot weaker than he would be at the end of the clone wars.

I don't think that qui-gon could actually beat obi-wan, Obiwan was arguably already a better fighter than qui-gon in episonde 1 and he didn't get worse.

7/10. Great for its time in 2004, kinda poodoo for ours. Too much inner turmoil and angst. Pacing was bad. Ending was rushed. Should have been much longer. It wasn't entertaining until the very end with the codes and mission. Great writing however and characters felt true to the originals. Worth reading but it doesn't live up to being ranked 3rd on this site by favs.

This is easily the best fic I have ever read! Love it!

This is so heartwarming. Honestly, I'm almost crying! SO sweet!

Awwwww...

Awesome!

I just want to tell you that I like re-reading it every now and then and I’m here to thank you again for writing this story and sharing with us :)

Oh my god. I have to have read this three times, and only now do I notice Iia'wah an is Hawai'i spelled backwards XD
But seriously, I love this story

Oh my god this is cancer to read on a phone, It seems interesting though so I'l check it out again when get home. hopefully its better there.

so if Obi-Wan lost his duel with Anakin and was killed by him, it'd be like the alternate ending to the Revenge of the Sith game from 2005.