|Reviews for Beyond the Veil Lies Chicago?|
| Soki711 chapter 4 . 5/19
I wonder what happened to the author. He wrote a super story.
| Corwyn chapter 4 . 4/21
Loving this story. I hope you get a chance to return to it. Thanks for sharing it with us.
| Fereydoun chapter 4 . 3/13
I wished you hadn't dropped this story. I enjoyed it more than I thought I would.
| mumphie chapter 4 . 3/1
Very good blending of stories. Wish you could put a few chapters in and let us know where you are going with this. It's been nine years. I ope you are OK.
| Revliledpembroke chapter 4 . 7/10/2016
Thetis? The river spirit that dunked Achilles in the River Styx? That's a hell of fairy godmother. Oh, and GIMME MORE!
| Revliledpembroke chapter 3 . 7/10/2016
It just occurred to me... shouldn't Harry have called Murphy LEFT-tenant, and not lieutenant? Being British and all that.
| Fez8745 chapter 4 . 5/28/2016
HP's response should be, "Oh a Fairie...Ok, Give Hermione back or i'll come to the Fairy land and kill all in my path until i find her. You have 24 hours to comply."
then just ignore her, the useless "Fairy Godmother" who did nothing his entire life.
| MattKennedy chapter 4 . 1/30/2016
Rather interesting story so far, especially with the end of this chapter. :) Hope you continue it sometime.
| Weirdshipper chapter 4 . 8/31/2015
I always wanted to read this type of fix cause Dresden files... But people never seem to write that much. Still great story even though your probably not going to update... Forever... :(
| Bianca Di Angelo 0 chapter 4 . 6/18/2015
i did not expect that
| Akasha Drake chapter 4 . 5/14/2015
Oh, that does NOT sound good for Harry Potter.
Or Dresden, for that matter.
| KShara Khan chapter 1 . 4/22/2015
Did you know that there was a cartoon that took place in Chicago in the 90s; it was called "The Biker Mice from Mars". Why don't you try adding that to your story? I think it would make it fun!
| GuesssWho chapter 4 . 4/12/2015
Well that's not good . . .
| GuesssWho chapter 2 . 4/12/2015
Medusa's story is depressing in any world.
| WhiteElfElder chapter 4 . 2/25/2015
Just great, two Harrys that are both trouble magnets, both with Fairy GodMothers. At least Harry P. may find out what is going on with Hermione...maybe she was sent home or needed for her knowledge. Is Harry an animagus or a were-something?