Reviews for Keeping Face
Torre58 chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
Ah! Hakkai angst! Gotta love it! I liked how you demonstrated how the different members fight. Goku and Gojyo out in the open,and Hakkai and Sanzo subtle.
Everybody's Neesan chapter 9 . 7/24/2008
Hakkai giving Sanzo a black eye... Oh, I wish that was coming up in the manga so I could actually see it instead of just having to imagine it! Complete awesomeness!
OA chapter 9 . 9/7/2007
Ah, a lovely feel good ending. Good job, I can't believe it took me so long to get around to reading this!

Though I must admit I'm disapointed that we missed Hakkai hitting Sanzo like that. *pouts* Watching Sanzo get what's coming to him is always awesome.
facethisnight chapter 9 . 8/14/2007
Aw, I wish there was more of the ending but I loved this story! It was really interesting! I think I'm going to go check out some of your other stories XD

Great story!

Althea17 chapter 9 . 8/6/2007
I can't believe it's over! To say, "I really enjoyed this fanfic" would be an understatement. My favorite chapter was when Hakkai was holding Sanzo by the neck and spoke politely to everyone. That was just so damn evil and HOT! The epilogue was absolutely perfect from Hakkai getting all the ladies to Hakkai punching Sanzo for losing his limiters. Bravo. I hope to read another one from you soon.
Rosa Lui chapter 1 . 8/2/2007
I looved this story - it's great to see Hakkai limiterless! You should write more. _ Anywayz, I loved it.
silver-eyed chapter 9 . 8/1/2007
aww, so sweet! haha, lol, sanzo had it coming even though technically he did give hakkai life TWICE! haha, great story! as usual XD
Veszelyite chapter 9 . 7/31/2007
Nicely ended. It's good to see Hakkai feeling comfortable inside his own skin, and the parting interactions with your OC's were handled very well indeed. It was also a cute solution, borrowing the braclet from Yaone. Hmm. One wonders what new form of "more masculine" limiter Hakkai might acquire in the future. Cufflinks, maybe?

I have to admit that I will miss this fic. I do hope you write more Hakkai-centric pieces in the future. Thanks for posting this.
nimblnymph chapter 9 . 7/31/2007
Hm... well, THAT was abrupt! After the intensity in the last chapter, I was surprised to read this was the final chapter. *shrugs* Your bunny. You know how it's supposed to hop.

The above was not to say this wasn't brilliant as an ending. It just seemed to come out of nowhere. What I ADORED about this chapter was the humor. You, m'dear, have a wonderful wit! I won't list my favorite parts or anything because I don't want to spoil it for other readers, but I read this at work... and almost knocked my entire cubicle over with the laughter. Oh, and I smudged my mascara all down my cheek due to the physical strain of having to hold my guffaws in. It really hurt, too, by the way. Laughter like what you caused with this chapter is simply not meant to be contained.

On a side note to the reviewer who pointed out that the dragon's name is Hakuryuu... That's only true for the anime. In the manga, Hakuryuu is only referred to as Jeep. They gave the dragon a name in the anime for aesthetic reasons only. So, technically speaking, you and Greyliliy are BOTH correct, but I thought I would point that out in case anyone else reads this review and gets confused. Nothing mean or snitty intended by addressing it either. *curtsies*

Thank you, Greyliliy, for yet another brilliantly written Saiyuki piece. If you're looking for more work, I'd like to implore you to relieve me of some plot bunnies. IF you're interested, that is? PLease? They're breeding faster than I can write them!
tath-chan chapter 9 . 7/30/2007
Best. Ending. Ever.

Seriously, while I'm unutterably sad to see this fic end, this is one of the most satisfying endings I've ever read. Have I mentioned how much I love your Sanzo? LUFF him! And you got his and Hakkai's relationship down so well... This has completely made my night. Er, morning, I guess.

So, any more Sanzo-Hakkai-centric fics with satisfying endings in the works? I'm at a loss of what to read now that this one's over, you know. I hope you won't keep your readers bereft too long.

Thanks for a great read! I can't wait for the next one.
WolfeChilde chapter 3 . 6/29/2007
The dragon is Hakuryuu
silver-eyed chapter 8 . 6/24/2007
lol, hahaha, funny. i like it, i like it a lot and i really do understand that kind of a bond, it's awesome! is this it btw? oh, and sorry about such a long wait, i haven't been online in forever (and i already said all this in RK, totally forgot) anyway, loved it. keep it up!
facethisnight chapter 8 . 6/18/2007
Fangirl Scream! I'm so happy you updated! Though the chapter was low on the oh-so beloved angst, it was very funny. I love love loved it! Only one more chapter? Aw, I'm gonna cry... I loved all the picking on Gojyo stuff...haha..

"He tried to eat me."

"I'm sure he did." Haha. You know, I can just imagine the look on Gojyo's face XD

Great chapter! I stayed on the computer thirty extra minutes just to read this. Update whenever you can! (and make the story more than one chapter longer...PLEASE? I know that's not possible though XD)
Anonymous chapter 8 . 6/16/2007
This is totally awesome! :) Loved it. Very well written.
villainstatus chapter 8 . 6/15/2007
Aw, that's beautiful.

A little gay-like moment for Hakkai and Sanzo, *laughs*.
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