Reviews for Keeping Face
amai-kaminari chapter 7 . 2/7/2007
OMG - This is exciting! Can't wait for the conclusion!
villainstatus chapter 7 . 2/7/2007
Oh, you done it now Sanzo. Hakkai means business. Yay, I've waited so long for this chapter. Love it.
Uzuuuuu chapter 7 . 2/7/2007
this certainly just brightened my day!

hakkai is getting a bit creepy, but just the way I like it.

nothing more spine-tingling than Hakkai-polite threats

nimblnymph chapter 7 . 2/7/2007

THAT was mind blowingly intense! I have no idea why you would say this chapter sucks. It had me covering my mouth in fascinated horror. No complaints whatsoever about this chapter.

Now, digressing from anything that could possibly resemble concrit... My inner Sanzo fanslut has finally met her match. I've threatened death, dismemberment, eternal pain, damantion, etc. to people who try and get between me and the blonde. Scary Ass Hakkai... hel, no! Hakkai can keep him, I'm perfectly fine macking on the other two! *steps back quickly* Just... do you think he'd mind if I just watched?
surrealgreen chapter 7 . 2/7/2007
Great chapter! I love the way you've characterized Hakkai and Sanzo in this fic. Its right on target with the canon versions, but it just brings out certain qualities-Hakkai's confusion and predatory instincts, and Sanzo's quiet, hidden concern. I can't wait for the next chapter, so I hope it comes out soon!
jarm chapter 7 . 2/7/2007
So glad your back with the story.
Kitematsu chapter 7 . 2/7/2007
wa! you finally updated!

-sobs in pleasure-

this chapter is really good and definitely not horrible. .

woots. nice cliffie there. i feel like jumping off just to see what happened. give us some more!

kitematsu O
silver-eyed chapter 7 . 2/6/2007
eek! OMG! what's gonna happen? ugh, so mean! you're leaving us hanging again after so long! *whines*

lol, anyway, well, i wanna know if this really is hakkai's breaking point. i look forward to more!
jarm chapter 6 . 1/15/2007
Hello, anyone there, you cannot leave and not come back. This story is to good to lose.
nimblnymph chapter 6 . 12/28/2006
It was short... but beautiful. You make Hakkai's suffering so bitterly elegant. I seriously felt like crying with him over this.

I like how everyone has a different POV on the subject of Hakkai and his limiters. Sanzo thinks he needs to just accept that he's a demon and get on with it. Hakkai is feeling left out naked and hurting because of it. Gojyo alternates between being pissed and worried sick. And Goku is torn because he doesn't like Hakkai being upset, but he trusts that Sanzo knows what he's doing.

What a delightfully screwed up bunch they all are!

Oh, and Jeriche is cool. Much respect for the old guy.
villainstatus chapter 6 . 12/27/2006
Dear God, Hakkai needs a hug. I love it!
Asato Sohma chapter 6 . 12/18/2006

Way to incorporate the summary into the actual chapter. That was really cool. I really like this story. It makes me smile. Keep at it!
Veszelyite chapter 6 . 12/15/2006
Oh, that was an interesting plot twist! In a town that the reader fully expects to be filled with intolerant people, there is a desk clerk who manages to be polite despite the river scene, and a conversational (and sane!) youkai.

It sounds like Hakkai is getting some food for thought. Good! Is this what Sanzo intended? One can only wait and see. _ Nice job with this installment. I'll look forward to reading the remaining chapters in the future.
amai-kaminari chapter 6 . 12/15/2006
I feel so sorry for Hakkai. TT_TT Nice story so far though... Look forward to the next update. _

Poor Gojyo too. Trying so hard to defend and help Hakkai...
Kitematsu chapter 6 . 12/15/2006
great chapter. i like where you are going with this

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