Reviews for Whatever's Left
jimmy-barnes-13 chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
it was different but great :D
Vote14Caskett chapter 1 . 7/20/2006
omg...that's freaky...but one hell of a story!
CrAzYhOrSeGiRl88 chapter 1 . 7/20/2006
Wow, I loved it! I'm really surprised you didn't win anything for that. I entered the same contest, only at the opposite end of the spectrum: Jater writing Skate. But wow, you did an amazing job w/ this. If you hadn't said you were a Skater, I couldn't tell. Very well written and with a very unique take on the Others. I have to say, I've always loved the fics that make them a little less human. _
Luminous Lu chapter 1 . 7/20/2006
Aw, Rachel!

see what I meant? your fic was so much better than the other three!

even being Jate, I felt my stomach jump while I was reading this. seriously, what a beautiful way to describe those two. I absolutely love what you did with the small amount of words we could use. you're a genius!

xoxo

-Lu
autumncolors chapter 1 . 7/20/2006
Wow. That was hauntingly beautiful. For a Skater, you write Jate very well.