Reviews for A Mother's Birthday
Shinichi's Lover chapter 1 . 3/24/2012
how cute. animal pov. close-but-not-yet-daddy lol xD
Hotaru-Naichingeru chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
So cute! I love these kinds of fanficitons, because it's cute how hayate loves riza in that cute fashion! And nice OC's!
BlackMorale chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
That was so, so cute. XD
blackXroseXpiano93 chapter 1 . 11/29/2008
Aw...so cute...lovely story
SundaAoiSora chapter 1 . 5/24/2007
aww cute anime 101 dalmations
AudioSafari chapter 1 . 1/18/2007
OH MY FUCKING GOD! This is so goddamn cute! AH LOVE BLACK HAYATE! Great job!
nmshy chapter 1 . 10/9/2006
thank you Black Hayate for getting the two lovebirds together. nice story:)
Bizzy chapter 1 . 9/19/2006
That was obscenely cute _;;
TaurenLeaf chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
oh wow! i love it! its so cute XD! im still smiling stupidly at my comp right now...
animelover9 chapter 1 . 8/1/2006
very cute and very original fic. love the writing style.
floofyMiko chapter 1 . 7/25/2006
D Squee! WAY too cute to not review XD. I loved this whole thing, absolutely adorable how you told it from Hayate's POV and having him communicate and plan with those other animals _ SOO cuutee! YAAY ROYAI XDD
Unexpected Hopeless Romantic chapter 1 . 7/24/2006
go Hayate..hahaha...kawaii!
The One Ring Alchemist chapter 1 . 7/23/2006
oh that was so adorable! I've never thought about things from Black Hayate's view. kawaii!
momiji-k chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
That was really cute and it was neat to see the story from Black Hayate's perspective. Well done! I only noticed one repeated mistake. Vendor is spelled wrong. Other than that you are in top notch shape. :)
Short Witty Name Goes Here chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
that is SO adorable
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