Reviews for Intricate Amendments
WiseGirlGeek chapter 5 . 4/14/2016
Ray chapter 17 . 2/15/2012
Impossible, I can't believe James is the first guy lily has ever fallen for. I was eleven when i a fell head over heels in love with a guy named mason. It was kind of obvious we loved each other then, and we got married and had three kids, who now have kids who have kids. We were eleven.
Sophie chapter 29 . 6/4/2011
Your story was really cute! I liked it a lot. The graduation speeches were adorable, and I liked that you took your time getting James and Lily together. I have one little critique though. I did not like your Sirius. He's one of my favorite characters, and I didn't like the way you portrayed him as a complete player and a douchebag to practically everyone. That was it though, for things I didn't like. Other than that, great story!
bella-tripped123 chapter 29 . 7/27/2010
awww i love lily and james 3 they are so adorable I wish that was real and sirius is hilarious he would be the most awesoment best mayte ever! aww so good :D xxx
Sirius'Padfoot'Black4eva chapter 29 . 7/13/2009
Charlotte chapter 29 . 8/18/2008
That was really good. Accurate by what Rowling actually did write about Lily and James. And the ending is perfect. kind of leaves you guessing, but not too much. brilliant!
xshrimpyx chapter 21 . 2/19/2008
that was a reli good chapter! i love ur stories, this 1 especially. keep up the good work.

xoxoxox :PP
xshrimpyx chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
great! it was reli good. hury with the next 1 please

Hanna chapter 10 . 1/9/2008
I honestly quite doubt that computers would be a topic covered by them in 1976, I'd just like to point that out ;) I'm fairly sure they didn't exist as they do today back then. Otherwise a good story.
shiny-chang chapter 1 . 6/24/2007

gr8 story! cant w8 2 read mor! :D

thestralwhisperer chapter 29 . 6/14/2007
this story is well written, has convincing characters and isn't boring or the slightest bit corny in story lines...well done... well done!
Rachel chapter 29 . 4/17/2007
ohmygod, that was the cutest thing i ever read. AH im going to read it again now... :-)
Rachel chapter 17 . 4/17/2007
ah! so cute i could cry :-)
Princess Shinko chapter 29 . 4/12/2007
that was absolutely amazing! u really developed the characters well and i hope that u write more of these types of fics ;)
rika chapter 29 . 3/22/2007
aw its soo good! wahh i'm sad its over. great job, you really developed the plot with enough fluff that i was *cough* satisfied ;] thanks
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