Reviews for The incident
funni monkey4 chapter 2 . 8/27/2006
this sounds like a good fan fic plz update
bluebaby3296 chapter 2 . 7/23/2006
is martin in this
heather1021 chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
it's good. plz continue!
A1Fastpitch chapter 1 . 7/20/2006
i really like your story please continue i will read it keep up the good work! You are doing a great job!

Ash
bluebaby3296 chapter 1 . 7/20/2006
i like it..um could u tell me if martin is going to be in it..and can u tell us how old ruthie is..thats important in a story...giving a backrouin info on the characters like how old they r...
Countrygal5411 chapter 1 . 7/20/2006
hm.. intresting... you may need to improve on the writing skills.. but good start

-CG
bubblz16 chapter 1 . 7/20/2006
i loved it it was so cool