|Reviews for In my lover's arms|
| maxrip chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
hey, have ya beat both baten kaitos games yet? They really are addicting, ya know? them and tales of symphonia are the best of the best of gaming as a storytelling medium.
| Rose Beloved chapter 1 . 7/18/2009
Under-aged smut fest.
I still LOL'd while reading it.
| Rosewood666 chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
Ya, 'twas good.
Get better betas ftw?
I'm not hammering her, but GothicalFairy...
Enough said. She knows I'm only messin with her (hopefully! :D)
Anyway, a very... amusing read. Made me smile and yep, 7/10.
| Raikon Fujibayashi chapter 1 . 1/29/2009
| BloodJemini chapter 1 . 6/16/2008
HOLY SHIT! THAT WAS FUCKING AWSOME! And it actully gave me some new ideas for my book. When i get it published im SO fucking sending you a copy! ty for the ideas!
| Nicrafetix chapter 1 . 5/27/2007
I'm slighty worried about you now...
Karl says think that i shall not mention here...
I'm scared for life.
| Gothical-Fairy chapter 1 . 3/4/2007
Awe, I got a mention! Thank you (hugs) I hardly did anything! Lol, well done on your fic tho! I have to be honest with you and say that we have very different tastes, but it was still ; it's quite scary that I know someone (younger than me!) that can write such good Lemon. Pity it wasn't yaoi tho...*ahem*
Anyway, good job. You have to let me know when you write another, k? Cya's!
| Sneaksta chapter 1 . 2/20/2007
Well, at least genis just lost his virginity to a 23 year old which is very funny. _
| DMHowe chapter 1 . 1/19/2007
Well. How do I put it?
Awesome dude. The ideas were original, and you kept in style with the characters of the game. (Presea didn't have one, so you can do whatever.)
One thing I'd suggest though is taking a bit more care with stating what's going on. It was good, but I felt a little to much was left to the imagination of the reader. Such as the ass-humping and the head. That sorta thing need's time taken over it to have a really good effect.
Overrall, very good. Clever use of personal knowledge and your own horny lust. (_ which btw, is really creepy for a guy two years younger than me. Ew. You should be 15 man.)
7/10. 7 for the brilliance of it in imagination, 3 marks lost for lack of description.
| Blade of Pureness chapter 1 . 11/25/2006
Well, it looks like all the reviews have dried up, ah well. I'm gonna start on my next fanfiction soon, joy!
| D chapter 1 . 10/18/2006
Wh-why am I the only one that finds it HIGHLY disturbing that the author wrote about two HIGHLY UNDERAGED characters having sex?
WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU PEOPLE?
| ManyHawks chapter 1 . 10/6/2006
It's okay-ish. I think it's over the top for them, but you're a better writer than me(probably). BTW, what's a two-way? haha
| dream.sequins chapter 1 . 9/7/2006
Man, I don't know how you can keep the pen name Blade of PURENESS (Oh, and pureness is a word) after writing something like this...
But it wasn't half bad.
Did I think it was perverted? Yes.
Did I think that the whole 'underaged thing' was just wrong? Yes.
Did I think that Genis was a horny ass? Hell yeah!
but it was an overall enjoyable read, and that's what counts.
| CrimsonGem chapter 1 . 8/16/2006
That was a very fun read.
I can just imagine Zelos' book with the picture of him, the author on the back cover.
| Rofl Master chapter 1 . 8/9/2006
I'm speechless! Really! But then again, I can't, since if I was, I can't be writing a review to you then...XD! Gesea Lemon! Wow! Incredibility...BEST LEMON FIC I've read my whole entire FF life. Thank you! May I request a Sheelos Lemon! I'd love to read it!
Holy Mackerall! This was awesome!