Reviews for In The Night |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! It's funny that all the Wraith are following John's instructions! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter! Cool, I guessed about Caldwell. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update soon! I am dying until I know what happens to the team and Elisabeth with the Wraith and probably Goauld (do you spell them so?) influence! Please let Rodney be able to help John. He seems to be strong but his mind has different persons in it and I wonder who of the two has the upper hand. Is it the wraith because of the behaviour of the other wraith or is it John who wants to help his friends? I want to know. I am really looking forward to knowing what happens next! Jordan |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! Is this around the time Caldwell was taken over by a go'old(snake things that go in your head) because he is acting pretty rude...controling...obnoxious! I wonder if Lizzie would have liked to go with them. I can't wait for the next chapter! I hope Rodney can do something for John! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wahoo! Roll in some delicious Sheppard whumpage, please! Just wishful thinking, Hee Hee! I can't wait to read more, so keep up the great work and please update soon! LOL! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent new chapter and I cant wait to see what happens next |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! This story has really reeled me in! I can't wait to read more, so please update soon! LOL! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! I can't wait to see what happens to John! And how the escape plan works! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent new chapter and I cant wait to see what happens next |
![]() ![]() ![]() luv it! more, i need more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This looks very interesting so far and I cant wait to see what happens next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice idea. Great writing! Can hardly wait to read the next chapter. Please update as soon as possible. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't wait to read more, so please update soon! LOL! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi, nice start and a very intriguing idea. I'm really curious as to where this story is going. I found one or two little errors you might like to change. 1. Ever since Ella and not ever sense Ella. 2. Caldwell and not Callwell. 3. The Wraith seem to be taking a break and not The Wraith seemed to be taking a brake.I hope you don't mind me pointing this out and please continue. |