Reviews for REFLECTION
aelynn chapter 1 . 12/6/2007
Amazing and insightful way of looking at Labrinth. I loved every second of reading it. It was well written, and I could feel more of Jareth in the doll than any of those sappy 'Jareth whisks Sarah back to the labyrinth' stories. Writing from such an unusual perspective and with such an original idea, this is certainly something that deserves a standing ovation. And further more, w00t.
maskedpainter chapter 1 . 10/19/2007
wow...

that's all i can say; wow.

i've never heard a story so sad and yet heartbreakingly loving like this before. i've never heard this take on the story in such a...poingant way. i honestly would love to see this continued as a mini-series or something to take away from the original one shot.

MP
Kogoro chapter 1 . 4/5/2007
Sorry but, am in a bit of a hurry though I yearn to give you praise and critiscm for your story! So I'll just surmise with saying that it's aboslutely adorable! ;)

And as of now, I'm putting you on my favourite authors list and Author alert list! Yippee!
Nienna Telrunya chapter 1 . 2/11/2007
Beautiful and sad.
Aran'sApprentice-Meahow chapter 1 . 8/7/2006
wow...what a COOL story. it seems really...true-very plausible, like it could really happen. i mean, not in the real world, but in Labyrinth's world. and it really is that Sarah did want him to be evil for her...in a weird way. the 5th paragraph from the end, starting with 'Was I not' is my favorite. it really has the heart of the Goblin King. well done! it's so poetic!

the owl thing was sort of weird, though. it seemed like it didn't fit in...it was too much a physical explanantion i guess.
Minachan the Neko chapter 1 . 7/31/2006
I loved your story. I'm a huge fan of the Labyrinth and in one of my many profiles on I'm also writing my own story. Yours is actually the first ff of The Labyrinth I've read so far. I only wished to see what others thought of the Labyrinth and to see if I should go on. You ff actually inspired me to go on. Thank you.

Love,

Minachan the Neko
Midnight Lady chapter 1 . 7/25/2006
her eyes can be so cruel...

original and slightly creepy. good job.
Mai Lin chapter 1 . 7/23/2006
I think I love you. Completely different from anything, But that's what you were aiming for. Wonderful. I'd ask you to continue but I think that would ruin it. Wonderful story. Thanks.
Notsilveraura chapter 1 . 7/23/2006
Wow... That was really good... I love it! . *claps* It was kinda sad though... *tear*
WickedGame chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
it was good. i'm so glad that i kept you on my favorite author list.
FromMyBackyard chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
*sniff*

that's so sad and so beautiful!

I never imagined him alive for just those 13 hours - that his life was gained only from her - but it makes sense, it suits the ending of the movie perfectly, explains so much.

oh...why did she say no? Why did she put him away?

*wails*

In her own words..."oh, you poor thing. you monster!"
Ocean Fairy chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
Wow that was very good and full of emotion. nicley done.

Ocean Fairy

xxxxxx