Reviews for Insanity Pledge
Enfleurage chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
This shows some potential but I stopped reading after the 3rd Authorial insert about what music you're listening to. Why on earth would you just add random comments in the middle of a fanfiction story? It's distracting and disrupts the story flow.
thebookwormxo chapter 1 . 10/17/2006
That was awesome! I loved it so much!
WaT-SM chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
okay. it sweet. but one thing.

to the agents.

they wouldnt ever say fallout or nickel and dimed.

they dont know the cases like that.

those are the episode title.

big difference.

they would say the colleen mcgrath case or sidney harrison.

never the episode title.

they are on a show. but never show that.

but still. it was sweet.

but odd at the end with martin saying lets slow dance in your kitchen.

that was odd.

but i still liked it.

good job.
hotchner chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
This was an EXCELLENT Story. I enjoyed having Sam going

undercover by herself. She handled herself real well. I

Loved it when she nailed the guy in the stomach. She should

of kicked him in the 'nuts' though. I hope that you put

more Jack into your next Story. Keep up the EXCELLENT

Writing. Can't wait to read another Story.