Reviews for Breeze |
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![]() ![]() Lovely stuff, Lou, you are a great writer, y'know. Very powerful, actually *sighs* MWPP fics are the coolest. Anyway, felt I should leave you a review for such a good fic - no wonder your friend thought it was good, huh? Excellent work, sums up a lot of Sirius' feelings. Well written as well, hardly any mistakes. Good job. Oh, and by the way - PLAN L! *dances*. Ciao! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey Lou! That's a wicked story! It's so sweet and sad. |
![]() ![]() So, so, so good! I liked that you made it clear that Sirius and Remus were close to Lily - not just James. I always liked to thik that a t Hogwarts, it was the five of them, not just the four. I've never really bought into those stories that talk about how Lily and James didnt get along, blah, blah, blah. Until I read your story, I've always liked MWPP (and L) stories, but I loked at James and Lily dieing as a necissary part of HArry's story - I never really saw it as the lose of two really great people until I read this, so THANK YOU! I look forward t reading your epic, I' trying to write one of my own, but I'm stuck halfway through and I'll probably never finish. I have more faith in you. I hope to read more of your work soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's very interesting to hear Sirius's thoughts on his old friends, and since I'm such a sucker for a backstory, this fic is made even better. :-) Good story... very emotional... nice style, too. Quite descriptive. Nice. :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah that was soooo sweet! I loved this story! Thank you sooo much for reviewing mine, I am off to read tainted love now.(even if D/Hr is not one of my fav ships!) LOL Thank you soooo much for the review, you are very gifted. Wonderful story! Bye |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was so good! I was almost crying at the end b/c it was sad-I felt so bad for Sirius & Remus! You're a really good writer, and this story was great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was good! Please continue, but don't make it that sad because I'm not good with sad stories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Incredible. I think most people know what the relationship between James and Sirius was like, but few can put it into words. You have done so wonderfully. Very spiffy. |
![]() ![]() That was beautiful, baby |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow...that was VERY good. It was really, really moving-the last line almost moved me to tears. Very nicely done. |