|Reviews for An Inkling|
| Miss Savvy chapter 1 . 10/30/2011
You have a superb grasp on Jack Sparrow's conscience and reflections. Honestly, his perspective seems to have been mastered by you. Your writing style is very impressive as well; I love the variation in syntax and the way you describe the scene. It's a lovely piece.
| captain.J.sparrow chapter 1 . 10/17/2007
Wow, this is beautifully written. I've longed to find a story about that particular scene that isn't filled to the brim with Sparrabeth! (Or at least I hope this isn't filled to the brim with Sparrabeth because if it is I seriously have to go back and read it again!)
I love how you show Jack's more thoughtful side but still manage to put his 'Captain Jack Sparrow' edge on it. I love the last lines, especially the very last one, it's such an overused line but you get it to work really well!
This is definately going in my favourites!
| morph chapter 1 . 7/26/2006
Fantastic! I love the ending and the artful use of itallics. Well done!
| music nerd chapter 1 . 7/22/2006
awesome. i love it.
| Trinity Day chapter 1 . 7/22/2006
/…and didn’t hesitate to go down with a fight./
/You forgot one very important thing, mate…/
/I’m Captain Jack Sparrow./
I *love* these last three lines. They're so powerful and bring such a smile to my face. Plus, the third last one is such a clever play on an expected phrase.
| Ani Sparrow chapter 1 . 7/22/2006
Ah, Jeeze, Cayenne - you've got me all filled up now! You put down in words what that scene does for me as well - bravo, my dear!
| HedgeNinja chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
I loved this one! Great writing. And now I'm going to be back to obsessing about DMC. Ah well.
| Riderazzo chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
That was good. I like the thoughts you had going though Jacks head. They were very in character. Good job!
| CaptainTish chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
Very well done! I like to think Jack would have gone down with his ship even without Elizabeth chaining him. I love your ending - "You forgot one very important thing, mate...I'm Captain Jack Sparrow." Wonderful! :)
Now, please update your other stuff!
| Robin Goodlass chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
Wonderful capture of such a big scene. I like the inner though here and how it's a summary but you know it's Jack's heart as well. Nicely written.
| ICRepresentative chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
Wow, this is fantastic. I love how you ended it with the tying of the two movies together.
| Fluffy0987 chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
Hi. I just got back from the cinema where I saw DMC. Damn, I hope they hurry up with the next part.
Anyway, I wondered if there had been anything written about it, and here it is! I'm glad you wrote this, I wondered what was going through his mind.
anyway, thanks for the entertainment.