Reviews for Living a Lie
The Superior Critic chapter 1 . 8/2/2006
This would be good.

If you ran Spell Check.

Or heck, just read it through before you posted it.

It is redundant. . .

But it could be good.

I am no liar.
Marisa chapter 1 . 7/22/2006
Wow that was great...i think you captured the emotion perfectly. I could definitely see Jess saying that to himself! Anyways, i think it would be a good chapter story, but it was still very good as a oneshot
CharlotteSTs chapter 1 . 7/22/2006
It's very good...

I like it, and I really think Jess would think those things...
pierzynskifan12 chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
I so see Jess saying and thinking all of these things. I like the story. Too bad this is a one-shot, it could've been good continued. Well anyway, good story.
Horsefan520 chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
Ok, so I am assuming (sp?) that this is Jess thinking about Rory, am I correct? Well, if it is, that is really good and it, I hate to admit, but actually made me choke up a bit because I could totally see him feeling that way. Really good. Too bad it isn't a continuing story, it could be really really good.