Reviews for Hush
ElricKeyblade chapter 1 . 1/1/2015
This fic is really sensual and fitting for these two in every way. I love everything about this drabble. Well done!
KageFuego4 chapter 1 . 10/24/2012
Very interesting, in that it really addresses the nuances of how a relationship between these two would probably be.
As such, I like it.
Zailana chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
What a cute little story! Very, very good Temari.

Thank you for sharing this!

deletedforpersonalreasons chapter 1 . 12/31/2009
Lovely, and, for some reason, this line made me almost tear up:

'Winter feels like dozens of tiny needles lancing her skin. It's a pain that's worse than a sandstorm. Winter gets inside Temari's body in a way that kunai never can, turning her own flesh numb and unresponsive. It eats sound. Everything is quiet and frozen and dead once the snows come in, burying the world in silence.

It's worse than Shikamaru's shadows. At least he never leaves her cold afterwards.'

Don't know why, or if it was intentional or not. Lovely piece though.
XxboredxX chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
so... why did shika have bite marks and temari have a bruse a big as his mouth?
LolaAtkinburg chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
OMG, this story is so good. Great job.
littlelightbulb chapter 1 . 11/8/2008
wow...i really liked this a lot. i liked the writing style- it was kindof poetic, almost elegant in a casual way. which is such a mess of contradictions, i hope it makes a little sense! but the portrayal of temari was nice, it bordered a little on petulant at times, but other times i really thought it was so on. but that's just my opinion. shikamaru was well written as well; i loved the part about him taking down her ponytails. this was very beautiful.

my biggest complaint (the thing about temari's character is me being nitpicky and not even major at all) is the title. 'hush' just seems to me to be kindof cliche, and it hides the good writing that's inside. i almost didn't click. but i did. and i enjoyed it!
rosso-bass chapter 1 . 8/30/2008
I've never read a story quite like this, but it's so nice. Beautiful even. I don't know how to describe it, but say that it struck me very deeply. Very well done.
Miyukii-San chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
not bad
xxguesswhoxx chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
whoa they stay in bed for 48 hours!
opEd-girl chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
One of the hardest thing to do as a fanfiction writer is to get the character development right. More often than not, stories i read where the dialog just seams so off, so contrived, like it would never happen in the actual character universe.

Luc Court nailed the personality, the mannerisms, the gestures, the dialog. It's seamless with the Naruto universe. Highly recommended.
avery18 chapter 1 . 3/2/2008
haha Shika is nicer than my husband. He always gives me a pouty face when I try to touch him with my cold hands :( (but I have to admit its cute as hell when he does it)
adriennelouise chapter 1 . 2/29/2008
Beautiful. Love this one-shot so much. I should have seen this one long ago...
MangKulas chapter 1 . 8/29/2007
i've read this before...and i remember being enchanted by the story...i still am...i like one-shots...they give you a scene and a story, but there is no complication in second-guessing what changes will come with the characters or the world in which they live in...

but there is still a story...
Kakashis-First-Kiss chapter 1 . 3/2/2007
aww! this is so cute! you should try more of this stuff, this is really good! they were so in character its scary...
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