Reviews for Sacrifice |
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![]() ![]() Awful |
![]() ![]() Love, love, LOVE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ugh I wish this had an epilogue. while I understand this was her choice and honestly... I'd probably do the same, i really wish there was another part to this. i have always loved the hot, rough, almost angry sex between them especially if it continues after they fall in love. i don't think their personalities would change from that too much. a long debate, their different friends, the different pasts... they all add up to that spicy/heated embraces that I can't help to love. they're the two smartest kids in the school so it would make sense and really, they should also be able to know that they don't have to agree on everything as long as they work it out. as for this story, I'm going to follow it in hopes that an epilogue or another scene is added at some point. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hermosa historia corta. Me encanto la definicion de personajes |
![]() ![]() I'm going to pretend he comes back and they work it out and they heal together and they get married :') because otherwise I'm in pain (Either way, I really enjoyed this! Thank you!) |
![]() ![]() My heart ached reading this. Thanx author. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I didn't really like the way Hermione was meant to save him. Sure she's super compassionate, but in this war everybody loses someone, no matter how or how many. Draco is far from the only one who is deeply traumatized. I think it is way out of character for her to be this deep into the war and still want to save the unsaveable: they will have PTSD and other issues not even time could fix. She's optimistic but she's not as naive that she could think she could "save" anyone through virginal sex. Plus this isn't her burden to rid Draco of, she has her own demons and she should the horrors of war better than Draco. It would have made more sense if she was having sex with him due to attraction or for wartime tension. Of course I'm being nit-picky about somethings. Virginity is a one-time small thing to get over in the scope of war-time events. I doubt either of them would be that attached to virginity. Besides, you are a great writer, keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing story telling skills! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice portrayal of Draco's inner turmoil |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahhhhhh I would read a whole 50 chapter or more length of this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was really good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() painfully lovely |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice |